webnovel
William_Bull
William_BullLv31yr
2023-07-04 06:25

This book is by far one of my favorite on this app. The character development of the MC so far is praiseworthy. Worth the read

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
Replies1
PandaDumpling
PandaDumplingAuthor

Other Reviews
PandaDumpling
PandaDumplingAuthor

Diegoa
DiegoaLv15

This novel for me has the potential to be one of the best in this platform if you continue to improve your writing, and if you continue to improve your story. From Chapter 1 to chapter 60, I liked the pacing of the novel, and that’s one of the things I like about this novel. The writing quality at this current moment is excellent. It’s really good, but I see a lot of potential in your writing if you can continue to improve. So, for now because it has been only 60 chapters. I am going to put it at 5 stars because it has been good. My second thing about this novel is the update stability, and it’s one of the best updates stability that I have ever seen. So, I am putting at 5 stars. The story development I am going to put at 4 stars because the story has been good, but I feel where we at 60 chapters, and maybe you do it in the next 40 chapters. I think in this current moment with your writing quality, I feel that you can do more and make the story development great. But, for now I put it at 4 stars because it has been good. The character designs has been really good, and for this moment I would put it at 5 stars. Now, for the background I was tempted to put at 5 stars, but I am not going to put there yet. I feel at this moment that you have done a good job at doing background, and I really like the similarities that it has with John Wick if you watched the 4 movies. And I really feel that in the future I would put it at 5 stars. But, I feel at this moment you could introduce the clans in France, and you could do it with Natasha. So, in conclusion I really like this novel, and I hope that you can continue to improve because I feel that this novel can be better than your first novel, and I see a lot of potential that you can fullfill if you do the writing and story right. Thanks for putting this novel and great job!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Related Stories

An Extra’s Rise in an Eroge

Arthur, an avid gamer, accepts his friend’s dare to beat an infamous eroge game that no one has ever completed. The problem? The game is designed to trap players in endless smut scenes, with every decision leading to the same outcome: more smut scenes, world destruction and game over. After countless failed attempts and growing frustration, Arthur takes to the game's community forum, venting his anger at the developers. To his shock, he receives a cryptic response from the developer challenging him to find a different ending. Moments later, Arthur is pulled into the game itself, awakening in the body of an unremarkable extra. Arthur finds himself embodying the very lifestyle he once despised—fooling around at every turn and getting swept up in the woman's seductive temptations. Can Arthur resist the game’s temptations, uncover hidden paths, and finally break free? Or will he become yet another player lost to its endless scenes? or he will do both? Follow Arthur’s journey for a fresh story filled with humor, plot twists, and concepts you won’t find elsewhere. This novel includes incest, so if that's something you're uncomfortable with, you may want to avoid it. [Warning: Mature content R-18 ] Tags:- Harem, Op Mc, smut, romance, Milfs, Virgins, Netori, Succubus, Vampires, Elves, Princesses, Gilfs, Demonesses, Angels, Goddesses, Dragons, Phoenixes, Dryads, long seggs scenes, System, and many more. Release Schedule & Support: Chapter Releases: 2 daily chapters, each with 1k+ words. Support & Bonuses: I'm newly contracted and part of the win-win program! Privilege purchases, gifts, golden tickets, power stones, collections, and especially comments are greatly appreciated and keep me motivated. Give this a try—it’s a story that promises surprises at every turn, as long as you make it through the beginning!

Sensual_Sage · Fantasy
4.3
233 Chs