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2023-06-24 20:52

Haven’t caught up with the most recent chapters but I enjoyed the pacing, world build, and web of connections around the main character. I liked the concept of development as the MC was dragged into a vortext of ups and downs. From the very begining of the novel, we witness how the MC is driven into a corner of extremes no matter what decision he makes. We also witness the gray world outside the MC’s cognition, such as the sequence of mysterious events that ultimately irons out his personality. It could be said that he didn’t develop because he wanted to but because he was forced to. The entire premise is a new touch in fantasy novels, and the first chapter truly leaves one hanging in anticipation to experience the short yet evenful few years foreshadowed in but one climatic introductory chapter.

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This novel for me has the potential to be one of the best in this platform if you continue to improve your writing, and if you continue to improve your story. From Chapter 1 to chapter 60, I liked the pacing of the novel, and that’s one of the things I like about this novel. The writing quality at this current moment is excellent. It’s really good, but I see a lot of potential in your writing if you can continue to improve. So, for now because it has been only 60 chapters. I am going to put it at 5 stars because it has been good. My second thing about this novel is the update stability, and it’s one of the best updates stability that I have ever seen. So, I am putting at 5 stars. The story development I am going to put at 4 stars because the story has been good, but I feel where we at 60 chapters, and maybe you do it in the next 40 chapters. I think in this current moment with your writing quality, I feel that you can do more and make the story development great. But, for now I put it at 4 stars because it has been good. The character designs has been really good, and for this moment I would put it at 5 stars. Now, for the background I was tempted to put at 5 stars, but I am not going to put there yet. I feel at this moment that you have done a good job at doing background, and I really like the similarities that it has with John Wick if you watched the 4 movies. And I really feel that in the future I would put it at 5 stars. But, I feel at this moment you could introduce the clans in France, and you could do it with Natasha. So, in conclusion I really like this novel, and I hope that you can continue to improve because I feel that this novel can be better than your first novel, and I see a lot of potential that you can fullfill if you do the writing and story right. Thanks for putting this novel and great job!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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