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Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv136mth
2024-05-14 04:31

It was a fun and good read, chapters are kind of short and some parts require you to not think and just enjoy. Overall enjoyed it and hope for more chapters.

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UnrelatableAuthor
4.4
18 Chs

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UnrelatableAuthor
UnrelatableAuthorAuthor

Thanks for the review! Also what parts seem nonsensical or hard to read without thinking too hard about it?

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Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv13

It's not any specific part it's just the type of novel it is, It's nothing too deep or serious and it's meant to be fun, what I mean by turning your brain off is not because of bad writing but because overthinking will ruin the story.

UnrelatableAuthor:Thanks for the review! Also what parts seem nonsensical or hard to read without thinking too hard about it?
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ghostensaop
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Love the story keep it going

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Ryuga899
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I like your idea for this fanfiction and hope you keep writing this because it’s a solid and good story if you keep doing this how about you use jujutsu kaisen for your next manga that you use for the story

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LeonardoDiCaprio1
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Man Nice story keep going next you could go with one piece

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Ryuga899
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You should do Hunter x Hunter for the next manga because it’s have things in comment with HxH like the technology level for Naruto world and like Hunter exam for chunin exams with Naruto world.

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Darwin111111
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It's a very good story. It does not stray away from the world background of Naruto and its protagonist and other characters seem to have a consistent personality. With clear and understandable flow of thought. The author is good. I have read only 10 chapters.

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JackalVadim
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Замечательное начало истории, с нетерпением жду продолжения. Хотя любопытно, будет ли любовная линия? В любом случае спасибо автору за труд.

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In the past, when the broadcast of Boruto had just started, I was very annoyed by the fact that Boruto's behavior towards Naruto was very annoying, so that it crossed my mind "if someone told him about his father's story"... Gradually, I stopped watching the anime, interest in anime and its stories disappeared. many years later or it could also be called today, May 18 2024, I am here, interested in reading Boruto fanfiction because of this book... I am very interested in the reactions of people from the Boruto era to the Naruto story, even though today the MC of this book has not yet drawn manga Naruto, but looking at the system panel which provides the Naruto storyline script is a show of the author... the implementation of the character is good, so you don't mistake it for someone else... I hope you don't stop and disappear the author

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ilove_3260
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Good story keep it up don’t drop it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Radioactive_Noodle
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Im already hooked. Excited to see more of this novel, especially liked the collectibles system the author did [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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