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Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv41yr
2024-05-13 07:48

It's a very good story. It does not stray away from the world background of Naruto and its protagonist and other characters seem to have a consistent personality. With clear and understandable flow of thought. The author is good. I have read only 10 chapters.

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UnrelatableAuthor
4.4
18 Chs

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UnrelatableAuthor
UnrelatableAuthorAuthor

Thanks for the review! I’ll contribute to update and stay true to the source material as best as I can!

1yr
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AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

Why did u even choose that trash era that shoudnt even exist? It was my fault that I didn’t check synopsis untill end, but still who in their right mind would creat sth in this era? Idk how good ur story is but just because u choose boruto era for me it’s trashy. No dissing ur work anything that is created in this timeline is trash.

UnrelatableAuthor:Thanks for the review! I’ll contribute to update and stay true to the source material as best as I can!
11mth
Keelyn
KeelynLv4

Boruto is better than Naruto and Naruto Shippuden maybe read boruto before go hating for no reason at all

AKARYUU:Why did u even choose that trash era that shoudnt even exist? It was my fault that I didn’t check synopsis untill end, but still who in their right mind would creat sth in this era? Idk how good ur story is but just because u choose boruto era for me it’s trashy. No dissing ur work anything that is created in this timeline is trash.
11mth
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THE_DUMB_BOT
THE_DUMB_BOTLv13

sorry dude but i think that boruto is trash i really hate it 😅 i did not like naruto too but i would watch naruto then boruto

Keelyn:Boruto is better than Naruto and Naruto Shippuden maybe read boruto before go hating for no reason at all
11mth
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ghostensaop
ghostensaopLv13

Love the story keep it going

1yr

Ryuga899
Ryuga899Lv4

I like your idea for this fanfiction and hope you keep writing this because it’s a solid and good story if you keep doing this how about you use jujutsu kaisen for your next manga that you use for the story

1yr
LeonardoDiCaprio1
LeonardoDiCaprio1Lv12

Man Nice story keep going next you could go with one piece

11mth
Ryuga899
Ryuga899Lv4

You should do Hunter x Hunter for the next manga because it’s have things in comment with HxH like the technology level for Naruto world and like Hunter exam for chunin exams with Naruto world.

12mth
JackalVadim
JackalVadimLv1

Замечательное начало истории, с нетерпением жду продолжения. Хотя любопытно, будет ли любовная линия? В любом случае спасибо автору за труд.

12mth
Pengamat_Ketiga
Pengamat_KetigaLv11

In the past, when the broadcast of Boruto had just started, I was very annoyed by the fact that Boruto's behavior towards Naruto was very annoying, so that it crossed my mind "if someone told him about his father's story"... Gradually, I stopped watching the anime, interest in anime and its stories disappeared. many years later or it could also be called today, May 18 2024, I am here, interested in reading Boruto fanfiction because of this book... I am very interested in the reactions of people from the Boruto era to the Naruto story, even though today the MC of this book has not yet drawn manga Naruto, but looking at the system panel which provides the Naruto storyline script is a show of the author... the implementation of the character is good, so you don't mistake it for someone else... I hope you don't stop and disappear the author

12mth
ilove_3260
ilove_3260Lv13

Good story keep it up don’t drop it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

1yr
Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv13

It was a fun and good read, chapters are kind of short and some parts require you to not think and just enjoy. Overall enjoyed it and hope for more chapters.

1yr
Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv3

Im already hooked. Excited to see more of this novel, especially liked the collectibles system the author did [img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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