Writing Quality: The writing quality is excellent with no noticeable mistakes. (5 stars) Story Development: The story has a lot of potential, but it falls short due to the main character, Issei. Issei's actions, particularly when he forcefully kisses soma, are problematic and resemble a form of assault. This significantly affects the rating. (3 stars) Character Design: Initially, I liked the main character, but his forced kiss on Sona is unacceptable to me, and he comes across as excessively edgy. (2 stars) World Background: The world background lacks sufficient details, which somewhat affects the rating. (3 stars) Updating: The fact that the story is free to read is a positive aspect. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story starts off promisingly, but the main character's behavior becomes increasingly ignorant and arrogant, relying solely on his overpowered system/powers. His brief redemption arc is short-lived, as he quickly reverts to his worst personality traits. Personally, I found this unappealing and chose to discontinue reading. (Not my cup of tea) Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes crafting this review, so please do not remove it simply because it may not align with your preferences.
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LIKEI know what I'm reading, bro. Your fanfic is just not my cup of tea. I like the story, not the MC. Maybe I'm wrong for giving this fanfic a review after reading only five chapters, but again, not my cup of tea
some_writer:I think bro didn't know what he was getting into when he started reading a High School DXD fanfiction.
No.. No this is.. He's right. You wrote Issei so r*pey. Like his redemption and improving was cool for the TWO CHAPTERS it was written but then you turned into GhostyZ.
some_writer:I think bro didn't know what he was getting into when he started reading a High School DXD fanfiction.
Saeko_Kaburagi:No.. No this is.. He's right. You wrote Issei so r*pey. Like his redemption and improving was cool for the TWO CHAPTERS it was written but then you turned into GhostyZ.
Saeko_Kaburagi:No.. No this is.. He's right. You wrote Issei so r*pey. Like his redemption and improving was cool for the TWO CHAPTERS it was written but then you turned into GhostyZ.
lol. deadass being GhostyZ is an insult now? i wonder how much he got from doing patron on all his novels
Saeko_Kaburagi:No.. No this is.. He's right. You wrote Issei so r*pey. Like his redemption and improving was cool for the TWO CHAPTERS it was written but then you turned into GhostyZ.
MorningWood_Dao:lol. deadass being GhostyZ is an insult now? i wonder how much he got from doing patron on all his novels