I love the overall storyline the way the god of chaos background is slowly revealed we even find out more about his race . One thing I think you need to improve on is the romance it’s not very fleshed out at all. Also the real world needs to be expanded on to make it feel more real but the novel as far as I’ve read is decent and it’s hard to find good stuff on this app this is like diamond in the ruff that needs a bit of cuting and polishing
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LIKEjust wanted to inform everyone of this awesome novel.I feel that it deserves more audienceit is truly a wonderful novel, one of a kind.i believe that anyone who decides to give this novel a chance after seeing this won't regret it.I don't know why I can't vote more than 3 times a day, i would have given the book all my power stones.but what a pity I can only vote with 3 power stones a day, anyways this is truly a wonderful novel.the name of the novel is:Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled