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2024-01-26 00:18

so the story started out well. mc is op and so on. you don't know the mcs level at all but you do other players. he goes around stomping down high-ranking devils and master npc assassins, and then around 350. I think it gets really stupid and gets worse. the mc goes from face stomping to struggling. You have players around like 150 and 175, giving him trouble when he was stomping devils over lvl 1100 before. the main villain of the story that acts just like Draco Malloy from hp, a spoiled rich kid with an explosive temper and no brains, turns into an evil mastermind, which is annoying the mc also stops getting xp until he kills some mobs around 409 ish. so we know his level is massive so we guess he just can't get xp from the low lol mobs but everytime he has a chance to kill a mob that he could get xp from he let's them go or seals them and he also has a portalto a realm he coukd get xp in but he never goes. it's like the author made the mc too op and like around chapter350 decides to weaken him or have a lot of fights that come to a draw and the whole convulted mission dealing with storm city is so convoluted you just want to scroll chapters. if the author had kept the mc growing, it would be more interesting. also, the mc has way too many enemies now, multiple factions attacking him now at once, and he hasn't grown any. so early story, it's good late story. it's just obnoxious.

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