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Talk yo sh## king

I love the overall storyline the way the god of chaos background is slowly revealed we even find out more about his race . One thing I think you need to improve on is the romance it’s not very fleshed out at all. Also the real world needs to be expanded on to make it feel more real but the novel as far as I’ve read is decent and it’s hard to find good stuff on this app this is like diamond in the ruff that needs a bit of cuting and polishing

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I agree

I read three Chapters and stopped it’s not really for me. i knew something was wrong when I saw the wishes but thought I’d give it a try. Not going to lie it pissed me off like how does the mc have the best talent and train’s for like 7 years and is still shit.Then he goes around teaching super powers like how???? Any way I had to rant sorry