Review Detail of MeanSister in I'm stronger than the hero but want to stay unnoticed

Item: I'm stronger than the hero but want to stay unnoticed
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

MeanSisterLv151yrMeanSister

Not a bad story, but definitely needs a touch up. Nice start to a story and am waiting for more.

Tatsuyayuki14

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Tatsuyayuki14AuthorTatsuyayuki14

Thanks for the comment, I'll try my best to make it a little more interesting in the future.

1yr

YuR006Lv4YuR006

agreed. Touching up the grammar will definitely help this author a lot, and I guess learning more ways to include details would work too.

1yr

Tatsuyayuki14AuthorTatsuyayuki14

Thank you for your comment, I'm trying to put up a corrector on my story and for the details I'll try to keep that in mind for the next chapters.

YuR006:agreed. Touching up the grammar will definitely help this author a lot, and I guess learning more ways to include details would work too.

1yr