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Thanks a lot for the review. About Jun, yeah, there are indeed some problems about the direction of his writing. He was not supposed to be a character that people can get attached to for now, but indeed he might not have been interesting with how I wrote him either way. It’s the same for the storyline too. This is probably because there’s not too much planning that goes into this story, and that the time I can spend for writing just decrease more and more, resulting in how it came out. My thanks for giving it a try. Hope you have good day.

If it’s about the boy, in simple terms, yes.

No, it’s not dropped. The next chapter will probably come today or tomorrow if nothing urgent comes up.

Thanks for dropping by.

Yeah, I’ve been quite busy lately since it’s end of a term.

Author here, If you are interested in checking out this mediocre (probably not even that) book and haven’t read the description, here are a few things to note so you don’t waste your time here: + No solid schedule (I try my best to write but it’s more like a temporary hobby and it can get quite busy in my personal life) + Bad pacings and plots holes can be attributed to the above as well as my lacking writing ability + It can get quite confusing at times + This is a rewrite, but it’s much different from its previous version now + Author’s note is just some personal thoughts on top of my head at that time, so skipping that is fine. + Not a proficient English user If you do have questions after reading (and criticisms) you can comment below this post and I’ll answer to the best of my abilities.

Didn’t expect a reply this late. In my opinion, I believe it’s precisely that it’s incomplete which makes it basically an open-ended question with countless possibilities as an answer. Since it’s open to endless interpretation, I think it’s only fair that the answer can be chosen according to his favor, and the add-on sentence about asking when they were going probably popped into his head right then, which itself would count as the truth. That said, since I haven’t read too much past the free chapters, I can’t say I grasp the nuances of his flaws, and am only able to present to you whatever my thoughts were on the reply Sunny gave here.

Without biases ofc

Ya know what holds equity? Randomness! Just do random rollcalls lol

Hmm…I guess it did get rather confusing. To summarise with the information at hand, Fier (a demon with a previous demon king’s authority) entered Jun’s world*, got info dumped by a boy, and then was subsequently sent away. Right after that, a priestess intruded into his world and revealed some stuff to him, making him excited and stuff. I also partly revealed a mentioned character, and that’s basically my current stopping point. Well, I don’t know if you read the whole thing or skipped some but I’m glad you at least gave this a chance. Thx for reading. In any case, Imma head out so have a nice day.