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StaidLynx
StaidLynxLv121yr
2023-09-30 03:25

1st volumecharactermc is op but it feels like he's a side character.he lacks character/maturity(it feels like he's weak).he questions everything.No character development even after getting massive plot armor/his mission practically no change in mindset.serena(his summoner) really feels like a summoner with no character,she doesn't have the aura of the main heroine(doesn't spent most of the time with mc)much like the mc.in simple terms their characters needsplotmc spent 10 yrs studying but it yielded no results as he utterly failed at his first deal(quite disappointing).Mc past memories haven't resurfaced.mc stats were upgraded to rank A but it stills feels weird as he spent a day to upgrade his first skill from rank f-c,but takes 10 yrs to upgrade most of his skills to rank A/B. he's group oriented.still not used to blood/death but he killed the goblins.(he freaks out too much).still not at school while he's 18yr old.overall the 10 yr time skip crucified the mc development stage(encounters,battles,leveling,academics,romance,maturity etc)well I'm hoping for volume 2 there's change

Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess

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Thanks for the review

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Pendulum_Author

Oops, I accidentally gave myself five stars. To compensate, you can punish me with all the golden tickets and power stones possible. I've been a shameless author and need to repent, sigh. Alright, I'm not gonna say much here. The book is GOOD, I always write peak. Read first 25 chapters, if you don't like it (which is highly impossible) drop it. If you do, keep it and bow to me!! You can ask questions here...

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XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv15

the Mc is unlikable and the story doesnt make any sense. He is 5 years old and treated like a slave boy and flirting with 8 year old girls. It is said that his father the king likes him but he never goes to him for help when getting bullied by his family and does what they want from a 5 year old boy...

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Exem_Awkan
Exem_AwkanLv3

Okay so this book is alright. It's a nice read. My only problem is it's cringe af. So I read till the first arc and my word, MC is naive, his actions, thoughts and aspirations all so childish. If it wasn't for a boatload of plot armour he would be dead waay before chapter 100.

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Ethernal7
Ethernal7Lv4

Essentially, what XxErenstonxX said. For the first dozen chapters, MC is a five year old that's treated like a slave by his family. I didn't do what a very thorough read because that alone was a huge red flag for me. If your willing to see how a submissive flirty 5 year old develops, then give this novel a shot. If not, don't even try.

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DruggedCookie
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The truth seems to me to be a very good novel, the construction of the world is fine, and everything else too, but the only thing I have inconvenient is the way the protagonist expresses himself or speaks With the others, it seems strange to me, I don't know, maybe it's me. It's like the interactions are weird to me But the novel is fine, a good construction, good writing quality, good character designs and the development is fine, neither too fast nor too slow, as I see it.

1yr
Maplemoron
MaplemoronLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Bi5228
Bi5228Lv4

I only read the first few chapters about 12 MC when he is a 8 year old child has maturity of a 5 year old child he is a loser through and through I hated everything he speaks he is not cautious he is a coward .I am not dropping the novel yet hope mc's personality improves , I will likely update the review if the MC improves.Writing quality is good in the sense the novel has no significant grammatical mistakes .

1yr
10th_YoungMaster
10th_YoungMasterLv13

Balanced Harem, Good comedy, 4 chapters per day, solid politics, complex magic system, what more could I ask for. But author please, could you make an auxiliary chapter for all the characters because there are a lot.

1yr
Gouzaburou
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The MC is inspired with heroism and mercy but he also fears killing. He nerfs his own power continuously and willfully remains a weakling. After wasting more than 10 years he decides to power up seriously. Forcing us the readers to watch him struggle with what should have been easy fights. Might as well have died by a powerhouse sneezing to reincarnate and try again,

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