webnovel
Bi5228
Bi5228Lv41yr
2023-10-05 02:01

I only read the first few chapters about 12 MC when he is a 8 year old child has maturity of a 5 year old child he is a loser through and through I hated everything he speaks he is not cautious he is a coward .I am not dropping the novel yet hope mc's personality improves , I will likely update the review if the MC improves.Writing quality is good in the sense the novel has no significant grammatical mistakes .

Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess

Pendulum_
4.4
375 Chs

Liked by 5 people

LIKE
Replies1
Tyson_1102
Tyson_1102Lv14

So what is the verdict?

1yr
Other Reviews
Pendulum_
Pendulum_Author

Oops, I accidentally gave myself five stars. To compensate, you can punish me with all the golden tickets and power stones possible. I've been a shameless author and need to repent, sigh. Alright, I'm not gonna say much here. The book is GOOD, I always write peak. Read first 25 chapters, if you don't like it (which is highly impossible) drop it. If you do, keep it and bow to me!! You can ask questions here...

1yr

XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv15

the Mc is unlikable and the story doesnt make any sense. He is 5 years old and treated like a slave boy and flirting with 8 year old girls. It is said that his father the king likes him but he never goes to him for help when getting bullied by his family and does what they want from a 5 year old boy...

1yr
Exem_Awkan
Exem_AwkanLv3

Okay so this book is alright. It's a nice read. My only problem is it's cringe af. So I read till the first arc and my word, MC is naive, his actions, thoughts and aspirations all so childish. If it wasn't for a boatload of plot armour he would be dead waay before chapter 100.

1yr
Ethernal7
Ethernal7Lv4

Essentially, what XxErenstonxX said. For the first dozen chapters, MC is a five year old that's treated like a slave by his family. I didn't do what a very thorough read because that alone was a huge red flag for me. If your willing to see how a submissive flirty 5 year old develops, then give this novel a shot. If not, don't even try.

1yr
DruggedCookie
DruggedCookieLv2

The truth seems to me to be a very good novel, the construction of the world is fine, and everything else too, but the only thing I have inconvenient is the way the protagonist expresses himself or speaks With the others, it seems strange to me, I don't know, maybe it's me. It's like the interactions are weird to me But the novel is fine, a good construction, good writing quality, good character designs and the development is fine, neither too fast nor too slow, as I see it.

1yr
Maplemoron
MaplemoronLv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
StaidLynx
StaidLynxLv12

1st volumecharactermc is op but it feels like he's a side character.he lacks character/maturity(it feels like he's weak).he questions everything.No character development even after getting massive plot armor/his mission practically no change in mindset.serena(his summoner) really feels like a summoner with no character,she doesn't have the aura of the main heroine(doesn't spent most of the time with mc)much like the mc.in simple terms their characters needsplotmc spent 10 yrs studying but it yielded no results as he utterly failed at his first deal(quite disappointing).Mc past memories haven't resurfaced.mc stats were upgraded to rank A but it stills feels weird as he spent a day to upgrade his first skill from rank f-c,but takes 10 yrs to upgrade most of his skills to rank A/B. he's group oriented.still not used to blood/death but he killed the goblins.(he freaks out too much).still not at school while he's 18yr old.overall the 10 yr time skip crucified the mc development stage(encounters,battles,leveling,academics,romance,maturity etc)well I'm hoping for volume 2 there's change

1yr
10th_YoungMaster
10th_YoungMasterLv13

Balanced Harem, Good comedy, 4 chapters per day, solid politics, complex magic system, what more could I ask for. But author please, could you make an auxiliary chapter for all the characters because there are a lot.

1yr
Gouzaburou
GouzaburouLv15

The MC is inspired with heroism and mercy but he also fears killing. He nerfs his own power continuously and willfully remains a weakling. After wasting more than 10 years he decides to power up seriously. Forcing us the readers to watch him struggle with what should have been easy fights. Might as well have died by a powerhouse sneezing to reincarnate and try again,

1yr
Related Stories

Young Master's PoV: Woke Up As A Villain In A Game One Day

"Now you see?" she shouted in a tone that was somewhere between annoyance and disappointment. "You can’t outsmart Scrients! They’re the most intelligent beings across the two realms!" "You’re right," I muttered, averting my gaze with a solemn sigh. "I made a mistake. I was arrogant to think a mere human like me could fool them." —BOOM!! "...Wh-What was that?" "Hmm? I’m not sure. Maybe you should go and ask the most intelligent beings across the two realms. Oh wait! You can’t. I killed them all." --- My name is Samael Kaizer Theosbane. On the last day of high school, I got into a fight with a kid I used to bully. It was a stupid and pointless scuffle. And in the middle of it, I tripped and smacked my head on a rock. That’s when the memories came flooding in… Memories of a different life. Memories of another world. Suddenly, everything made a twisted kind of sense. I realized two things. First: I was inside a game I used to play in my past life. Second: I was a villain. A villain! Not the cool, mysterious, tragic kind either! No, I was the worst kind of cliché — a spoiled, insufferable, and arrogant young master. The sort you'd find in those poorly written fantasy stories. You know the type! The one everyone hates. The one the hero would beat into the ground to show everyone just how strong and righteous he is. Yeah. I was that guy! My fate was to be a stepping stone for the main characters, be manipulated by a Demon Prince, and die a dog's death. And the hero? The hero was the same kid I’d been bullying all this time. The one I just got into a fight with. He was supposed to be the savior of this damned world. A world teetering on the edge of destruction, beset by wars, calamities, and a grim future that only I knew. And waiting at the end of it all was the final antagonist. The unbeatable nightmare. …The Spirit King. But could I even make it to the end? Could I really survive in a game where defeat was the only certainty? A game that had now become my reality? “Ah, fuck it.” I had no idea if I could. But I sure as hell was going to try. Extorting extras, manipulating main characters, altering the story to my advantage, stealing the hero’s cheat items, killing villains long before they could become threats — nothing was beneath me. Would the main characters be affected by my actions? Excellent! Would the story change? Even better! All I cared about was me. My survival. My life. My choices. “I’ll live this life with no regrets.” ...But as I soon discovered, fate wasn't so easily changed. And the price of rewriting your destiny was steep. ========== Discord Server: https://discord.gg/VjFQtDUaTR

The_One_Who_Was · Fantasy
4.7
196 Chs

The Innkeeper

In the depths of a newborn universe, a cultivator takes advantage of the abundant energy to refine himself a treasure. But after 14 billion years of refining and quite a few more to go, he decides to entertain himself by releasing countless systems and watching how the creatures of this fledgling universe handle them. On Earth, a young man, lost and confused about what to do with his life, sits in a park and looks up at the night sky. A shooting star, a wish and a bang. When the boy finally wakes up he hears a sound, "assimilation complete. Launching System. Welcome to the Midnight Inn. Host Designation: The Innkeeper." To learn more, go to: lifesketcher.net Discord: https://discord.gg/yqCkHedcUP Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=61551387105778 Instagram: https://instagram.com/theinnkeepernovel?igshid=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

lifesketcher · Fantasy
4.6
1637 Chs

Void Evolution System

5 years ago, Earth was subject to an event now known as the “World Awakening”. At that time, the world completely changed. Mana awakened in the world, gates began opening, and a holographic screen showed up in front of the eyes of every human that outlined their “status”. Each individual was given a talent to start with, ranging from simple abilities like enhanced eyesight to insane fantasy stuff like pyrokinesis. And within this myriad of abilities, Damien awakened a spatial affinity with the skill “short-distance teleportation”. At first, he was excited, thinking about intense battles and gaining great power, but the reality was quick to shoot him down. His ability only worked in the area 10 meters around himself, and his physical stats were insanely weak, leaving him tired after using his ability a couple of times. Disillusioned by his weakness, Damien lived a quiet life doing anything he could to meet ends meet, until one day, everything changed. Damien was betrayed and thrown into a gate, left to fend for himself in a labyrinth of beasts. Something snapped in him that day. He refused to stay weak and keep his head down any longer. When he emerged from the darkness, he found himself in a new world with no idea how to return to earth. However, he wasn’t the same kid he was when he first fell. ===== Discord: https://discord.gg/sEfafFXazb ===== Cover by Lia.Audelia

Crocs_is_Dead · Fantasy
4.2
1899 Chs

My Wives are Beautiful Demons

Vergil, a 21-year-old young man, leads an apparently simple life in a somewhat troubled world. His family is also simple—although his father is no longer alive, his mother has always been by his side, despite being a bit... aggressive. But that's not so unusual nowadays, right? Everything changes drastically when Vergil, after an unexpected death, awakens as a demon. To his surprise, he discovers that he has accidentally married beautiful Pure-Blood demonesses. Now, he will discover how the world really works from a Demon's perspective. WARNING: Before you get on my nerves, the book is inspired by three works that I like. I made scenes PURPOSEFULLY SIMILAR by imitating dialogues from the originals, IF IT WAS A COPY the site would not approve it. Also, if you are so bothered, simply DO NOT READ IT. ---- Discord: https://discord.gg/2rFfaP9BfB

Katanexy · Fantasy
4.9
320 Chs

Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!

After being hit by a car, Oliver wakes up only to find himself reincarnated as the 4th young master in one of the most powerful clans in the world. However, just after his birth, he is declared to be useless by his mother. Devastated, he later realizes that he has been born into the world of a novel that he used to read. This world is plagued by war between exorcists and demons, where only the strong survive while the weak are devoured. In such a cruel world where death is only a mile away, he, born without talent, is expected to only suffer his whole life until he hears it... [Ding! Conditions met. Binding System has been activated.] A system that guarantees a 10x reward... [Ding! Target has awakened one of the 4 special eyes!] [Obtaining 10 times the reward....] [Host has awakened the...] It is not only a matter of time before he can reach the top of the world and live comfortably! _____________________________ Patreon: https://tinyurl.com/winterdragon573 Discord server: https://discord.gg/YXHmERu2mH

WinterDragon_1 · Fantasy
4.4
297 Chs

I Can Assimilate Everything

"If all the Ancient Ones rise against us, I'll burn them all. If the entire world turns against us—I will set it ablaze. Nothing will stand in our way. Nothing!" - Achilles Adrastia Maxwell --- Death followed Achilles like a plague. Finding himself at his lowest point, he comes to realize how little value human life held as terrifying Advanced Humans and Evolutius Beasts waded across the Colonies of this World. About to lose the only remaining person close to him by falling into the jaws of an Evolutius Beast, a spark bloomed inside of him as the Evolutius Crystals he held disappeared, and he saw a distinct blue panel appear before his eyes! [Achilles Maxwell] [Assimilation]:: Organic Crystal(Evolutius Crystals)(3%)- Obtained qualities of Regeneration, Energy Conversion, Flexibility, and Light Manipulation  [Existence Corruption Value]:: 0% [Complexity]:: Negligible A simple spark. And yet the changes it brought…were limitless! In an endlessly vast post-apocalyptic world filled with futuristic Colonies that merged magic with technology, undercurrents surge from the depths of the World as even the Ancient Ones sealed many years ago begin to awaken. In the middle of all this, the terrifying power dwelling within Achilles leads him to question its origins, and the answer to this is something that resonates and leads back to his very bloodline. Ancient Ones. Advanced Ones. Ancient Bloodlines, and Unfathomable Lineages...anything and everything swirls into a storm of heavy proportions that will change everything!

Adui · Fantasy
4.6
213 Chs

The Epic Tale of Chaos vs Order

Thousands of years ago, humankind left the Old World. We enter a new age where science and magic are no longer opposing concepts. With these new opportunities came danger in the form of the Dark Races and the ones that named themselves Gods. However, if there was one thing humans were good at was their ability to destroy. Humankind fought and carved a bloody path into the new world. Cain's luck had never been good, but his destiny changed forever once he decided to harden his heart and face the world without fear or hesitation. --Godslayer Humankind's motto.-- We can comprehend the supernatural. We can dominate the supernatural. We can kill the supernatural - Adam, Emperor of Godslayer Humankind, The First Titan. Current schedule: 21 chapters a week. Bonus chapters: Over 600 power stones: 3 extra chapters. Over 800 power stones: 6 extra chapters. Over 1200 power stones: 9 extra chapters. Discord channel: https://discord.gg/R666sNEdrU

Redsunworld · Fantasy
4.5
1726 Chs
Login