webnovel
Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv31yr
2023-08-18 22:09

Didn't expect much so I wasn't really disappointed. This story is above average from the standard in this platfrom but it's still lacking to be called a good story.I haven't really made it that far, the stiff interactions really made me lose interest. The characters just don't feel alive nor interesting. The story just reads like a chinese novel, even the synopsis is like one.To be fair, there were thoughts that was put into making this story but the writing is just lacking.

Naruto: Clan of Shinobi

Passerby_Venne
4.6
59 Chs

Liked by 3 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Shady_Emad_
Shady_Emad_Lv14

The story got potential, And the side characters I love them, I can't wait to read the new chapters. In the end, the writing quality is excellent, the interaction between the characters is great, and I hope the AUTHOR keeps improving beyond his limits. PLUS ULTRAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

1yr

Peyo78
Peyo78Lv1

I love the pace of the story so far, not too slow and not too fast, the interaction of the characters feels very fluid and not at all forced (the characters feel alive) especially the grandfather. ha ha ha follow the author. 10/10

1yr
ROBtheBOB
ROBtheBOBLv5

really liked this book a great read. mc is likeable and op but not crazy op. I like how he likes his clan and how it has romance but not over the top. I think you have made a really great story.

1yr
sapient
sapientLv4

one of those stories where there is an mc that does nothing. no changing plot, only the existance of the zakari clan would have changed the entire history of the elemental nationes. everything is the same and it doesent make sense. just some sugestions dont write if you are incapable of doing so. if you write a story at least bring change.

1yr
Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneAuthor

I don't know who this author is, but sometimes when you read someone's work you just get a feel for the author's personality you know? I have to say, I feel like the author is smart, sharp, sensational, sexy, strong, sophisticated splendid and stunning all at the same time. A real Super dude. As for his work, even though there probably are many flaws, the brilliance of the author outshines those flaws leaving you wanting to read more. I think even Steven Hawking would have said "There's no one as smart in this century as this author." had he met this author. Even Einstein would have bit his lips in frustration whenever he met the author of this book. this is probably true Read this at your own risk, risk of getting addicted.

1yr
95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv5

Till Chapter 28 First are good points The writing quality is excellent Update stability is also good The Mc is not bad either Now for bad points Up till recent chapter its nothing but the same old naruto with addition of mc and his clan...which didn't really change anything of significance till now...the chunin exam has and everything was same as original aside from Giants being Mc fiance and 3rd surviving which doesn't really matter over all

1yr
iLeech
iLeechLv4

You want me to read this story? Fine, but pay with your life!

1yr
Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneAuthor

Hello everyone, as the author I just want to say, I hope you read with an open heart and have patience since I'm not the best writer, but I will do my best. I already have an idea how I want to end this and there's one thing I'm really good at, endings! Everyone loved the ending of my last fanfic so make sure you read that one as well. Review this after rereading for a bit to help me out 😊

1yr
JustJacky
JustJackyLv14

I mean honestly the writing isn't bad plus I somewhat like the characters themselves. But honestly I'm at chapter 15 and I'm disappointed with the wish like most people but most importantly not abusing his "infinite Chakra" by just making a shadow clone with near infinite Chakra then making him clone himself to train instead of doing it as one person which is insanely stupid.

1yr
Scarzz
ScarzzLv10

It's been a long time, since I saw a good story in webnovel, I took my power stones. (tanslator),.............................................................................................

1yr
Related Stories

Fate: I Heard After Death, You Can Ascend to the Throne of Heroes?

Promise transmigrated to the TYPE-MOON world and became one of the students of Waver Velvet at the Clock Tower. But a dream must eventually come to an end. Upon waking from a night's sleep, he recalled his identity as a transmigrator and also discovered his golden finger. A Heroic Spirit Class Card. It can take Promise to different eras, and by leaving behind corresponding legends, he can ultimately ascend to the Throne of Heroes! He thus travelled to ancient Greek mythology and Norse mythology. Promise: "I heard after death, you can ascend to the Throne of Heroes. What are you waiting for, come on, kill me!" (PS: This book is not a traditional simulator story; its content mainly revolves around the Age of Gods, hence the Age of Gods is a long narrative! I didn't use TYPE-MOON in the title as it was already too large) __________ Yup, this is a translation, coz why not? The credit goes to the original author, "It's Just Fate /Fate is just a book." Chinese name: 缘分而已 著 / 游戏竞技 And so, if the original author is reading this and wants me to remove it, then please leave a review below. Link: https://trxs.cc/tongren/8889.html Original: https://www.hbooker.com/chapter-list/100389372?arr_reverse=1 https://wap.ciweimao.com/book/100389372 ......... For advance chapters join my Patreon .. patreon.com/abhi28

Abhii_28 · Anime & Comics
4.7
303 Chs

MHA : Cursed by Fate

The story starts at the end of another. A young boy reincarnated in the world of 'My Hero Academia' and he was born with the template system of 'Ryomen Sukuna' from Jujutsu Kaisen. He was born decades before the canon story starts and he was in the same generation with people like Rumi, Ryukyu, Aizawa etc. He lived the typical reincarnated life. He had a great family this time around, went to UA, faced multiple challenges and overcame them, fell in love and went on to fight the main villain All for One. But here is the twist. This story will start only after the main character complete the Sukuna Template which is the end of his story. We will skip the whole part of getting to UA, training his power, falling in love, completing system mission etc. This is because the main character is truly himself only after the system is completed. That is when the main character became truly free again, without system missions and Sukuna's influence. This story will be like 'Frieren: Beyond Journey's End' where the story will reveal the past while also moving forward. I am not very good with synopsis so please just read the first few chapters. .. .. //////////////////////// What to expect : #A good MC but fate wants him to be evil. Being good and having Sukuna template does not go well. #Rumi as the main romantic partner with a few girls here and there. It's complicated but ultimately in the harem category. #Overpowered MC from the start. Only All Might and All for One are even in his level of strength. #Revenge and tragedy. This mostly happen before the story starts but in the current timeline there will be no tragedy. #Although MC is in an older generation, the canon timeline will still be relevant. #Slight AU on the years of characters. Mostly the old heroes so that they can be in the same generation. For Example Midnight is like two years younger so that she was MC's classmate That is all.

Willbe · Anime & Comics
4.8
17 Chs

Naruto Card King

Haruto Saito, was playing a mobile game called "King of Cards" when his phone exploded due to overheating. He then transmigrated into the world of Naruto and found out... Why can I see the name, identity, and reputation of each of them? Killing hostile ninjas will drop cards? Ninjutsu cards! Taijutsu cards! Forbidden jutsu cards! Mystic jutsu cards! Can cards be eaten? Will you gain corresponding abilities after eating them? What are equipment cards? Killing Uchiha clan ninjas can drop Sharingan bloodline cards? Killing Hyuga clan ninjas can drop Byakugan bloodline cards? What if I kill Kaguya? ! ! Naruto world is gamified! Reputation exchange! Ninjutsu enhancement! Achievement rewards! Unlimited first kills! "Excuse me, I'm not targeting anyone, I just say that everyone here is garbage!" At the Five Kage Conference, Haruto Saito said lightly, tapping his fingers on the table. Raw Name - 火影之卡皇

RawInk21 · Anime & Comics
4.1
434 Chs

Pokémon: Chronicles of Freedom

For Cain, the promised land of opportunity in the Pokémon World was not the paradise he imagined. Instead, he fell into the hands of the sinister Team Rocket, a prisoner on an island where darkness devours hope. However, even in the most desperate moments, fate did not abandon him entirely. A strange twist brings him back to the beginning of it all, to the place where his dreams were buried under the shadows. Now, with the knowledge and scars of his previous life, Cain has the chance to correct the course of his destiny. Free from the chains of the past, he must forge his own path in a world full of mysteries and dangers. With new allies and old enemies, the battle for his freedom will not be easy, but Cain has decided that this time he will not fail. Neither against the Pokémon nor the humans who stand in his way. ... THIS IS A TRANSLATION! Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/GoldenDragonKing (180 chapters in advance, story tag is "PKCL-En").

Golden_DragonKing · Anime & Comics
4.7
570 Chs
Login