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Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneAuthor1yr
2023-05-29 06:38

Hello everyone, as the author I just want to say, I hope you read with an open heart and have patience since I'm not the best writer, but I will do my best. I already have an idea how I want to end this and there's one thing I'm really good at, endings! Everyone loved the ending of my last fanfic so make sure you read that one as well. Review this after rereading for a bit to help me out 😊

Naruto: Clan of Shinobi

Passerby_Venne
4.6
59 Chs

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Abyssal_Ram123
Abyssal_Ram123Lv4

I asked this somewhere else but I thought it wouldn't be seen there so imma ask it here, will others take what is special about him (said in a way that wouldn't be spoilery)

1yr
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Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneAuthor

no, his clan members have a very merged version of his, but that's all

Abyssal_Ram123:I asked this somewhere else but I thought it wouldn't be seen there so imma ask it here, will others take what is special about him (said in a way that wouldn't be spoilery)
1yr
Abyssal_Ram123
Abyssal_Ram123Lv4

ok thanks for responding

1yr
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Shady_Emad_
Shady_Emad_Lv14

The story got potential, And the side characters I love them, I can't wait to read the new chapters. In the end, the writing quality is excellent, the interaction between the characters is great, and I hope the AUTHOR keeps improving beyond his limits. PLUS ULTRAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

1yr

Peyo78
Peyo78Lv1

I love the pace of the story so far, not too slow and not too fast, the interaction of the characters feels very fluid and not at all forced (the characters feel alive) especially the grandfather. ha ha ha follow the author. 10/10

1yr
ROBtheBOB
ROBtheBOBLv5

really liked this book a great read. mc is likeable and op but not crazy op. I like how he likes his clan and how it has romance but not over the top. I think you have made a really great story.

1yr
sapient
sapientLv4

one of those stories where there is an mc that does nothing. no changing plot, only the existance of the zakari clan would have changed the entire history of the elemental nationes. everything is the same and it doesent make sense. just some sugestions dont write if you are incapable of doing so. if you write a story at least bring change.

1yr
Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneAuthor

I don't know who this author is, but sometimes when you read someone's work you just get a feel for the author's personality you know? I have to say, I feel like the author is smart, sharp, sensational, sexy, strong, sophisticated splendid and stunning all at the same time. A real Super dude. As for his work, even though there probably are many flaws, the brilliance of the author outshines those flaws leaving you wanting to read more. I think even Steven Hawking would have said "There's no one as smart in this century as this author." had he met this author. Even Einstein would have bit his lips in frustration whenever he met the author of this book. this is probably true Read this at your own risk, risk of getting addicted.

1yr
95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv5

Till Chapter 28 First are good points The writing quality is excellent Update stability is also good The Mc is not bad either Now for bad points Up till recent chapter its nothing but the same old naruto with addition of mc and his clan...which didn't really change anything of significance till now...the chunin exam has and everything was same as original aside from Giants being Mc fiance and 3rd surviving which doesn't really matter over all

1yr
iLeech
iLeechLv4

You want me to read this story? Fine, but pay with your life!

1yr
JustJacky
JustJackyLv14

I mean honestly the writing isn't bad plus I somewhat like the characters themselves. But honestly I'm at chapter 15 and I'm disappointed with the wish like most people but most importantly not abusing his "infinite Chakra" by just making a shadow clone with near infinite Chakra then making him clone himself to train instead of doing it as one person which is insanely stupid.

1yr
Scarzz
ScarzzLv10

It's been a long time, since I saw a good story in webnovel, I took my power stones. (tanslator),.............................................................................................

1yr
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