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Kizarudesu

Kizarudesu

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Just a reader not a author. Thank you.

2019-07-17 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesu23 days ago
    Posted

    This fanfic makes people high blood pressure!! I enjoyed it from chp 01-20 and had good hopes, but all that was destroyed by the emergence of an unclear system, damn! and why does the mc have to hold back when he plays a game about sex and often talks about damn anime! the author drinks and does drugs to the point of being brain dead! not recommended!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesu24 days ago
    Posted

    Not Recommend! the story is rotten! the story is rotten! the story is rotten! the story is rotten! the story is rotten! the story is rotten!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    Yeah, it's like reading a messy beginner's fanfic. Maybe for me the characters are too childish and the writing is too messy. Maybe because I've seen better system fanfics so if I see the bad ones I can already see them. Well, for me, this fanfic has no potential, it's just to fulfill the creator's wishes. Touch the grass bro!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    Oh it turns out too many predictions are not good, I think at least the main canon for Bruce Wayne still applies to show that no matter how much preparation you make you can't escape fate and Bruce becomes a cooler Batman in my opinion with Tony Stark's memories. Yeah that's what I thought it turned out to be too good to be true!!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    Good superman fanfic, but I feel like I've seen it on fanfiction.net or is it a coincidence? But keep up the enthusiasm for the update and don't slack off, at least 2 chapters a week, you'll definitely be able to do it.

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    Very uninteresting. Yes, that's the word that came to mind, I initially had the expectation that Mc would be born in Japan and train in martial arts, ninjutsu, and so on for several years and then go straight to America because his parents had work to do. At least the plot is more interesting if we don't follow the straight line of canon and create a more interesting background rather than bragging to someone else that he is someone who can see the future. Seriously you make stupid stories and boring slice of life. Yeah that's all!!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Commented

    Dude, don't you know that the genin team was formed by the Hokage? why are there genma and aoba who are basically not academy teachers? try watching Naruto or read the manga carefully.

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  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    Ugh sorry dude, this Tony Stark isn't to my taste. At least I like the development of the technology and Mc doesn't waste his time. It's just that the problem with this fanfic is the romance (a planned and strange harem) and too many time skips. I stopped reading when Tony Stark met the Ancient One and he called her "wife" and was sure Tony loved her very much. Come on, seriously, bro, do you like bald women who are hundreds of years old?? Very unreasonable. That's all!!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    Interesting fanfic!! Even though the MC has a rubbish system, in my opinion the story planning is very neat, and also please continue the hard work. Thank You!!

  • Kizarudesu
    Kizarudesua year ago
    Posted

    This is a pretty good Ghost Rider story in my opinion, the only drawback in this story is that the complexity of the system is not really explained here and the Marvel world where the MC is located is not very detailed and an example is after fighting a villain and suddenly the system wants to send him to another world, and the author did not explain the aftermath of the battle. Yeah, that's the downside in my opinion, please make the story a bit more complex and don't forget the aftermath. Thank You!