IceCoffeLatte

Why don't fanfics like this get thrown in the trash right away? It really hurts the eyes to see them. Trash trash trash trash trash not recommended not recommended not recommended.

Honestly, I prefer stories like this, using force when necessary and using intelligence to solve problems. It's much more satisfying! Recommended.

I actually think this fanfiction is fine, but the flaws are obvious, such as the Mc dialogue being too limited and the lack of any off-field life. It feels a bit monotonous to me.

Seriously, it's already 350++ chapters and still no comments? Let me fix it! The story is just so-so, the Mc is Chinese, the progress is boring. Well, I can't really enjoy it.

What is a mythical zoan devil fruit, chaos form, dawg? That's Chinese nonsense, hahaha. From the beginning of the story, it's not recommended. Well, basically, if you feel dizzy, it's your responsibility, hahaha.

Not the best, but still worth reading. For me this is a fanfic just for entertainment and doesn't require searching or thinking too deeply, so this is for fun. that's all.

Honestly, if there wasn't a trashy system, I would have liked the story more. It's okay to have a system, and the system is related to hard work and rewards, but at least add a status window for the Mc so readers can see the progress of the Mc growth so they don't have to guess. This makes the story seem abstract in my opinion, which is what's less interesting about this fanfic. That's all!

I prefer if Lucci remains a member of the CP and continues to rise to become a Holy Knight, step by step with the principle of 9 to 5. The story will definitely be more exciting than suddenly having Kaido join the Beast Pirates, which is more difficult than a relaxed life, hahaha. That's my opinion, please ignore it!

I like Mc who have clear goals and a story that has a good plot to follow, and whose powers don't rely on rotten devil fruits or anything like that. I enjoy it!

It was actually fun, but when I saw the devil fruit, I felt disappointed for some reason. It was discussed from the beginning of the chapter that Mc has a monster physique, why not add more buffs to Mc with zoan fruits, or at least stronger paramecia. Well, I stopped following when Mc joined the marines just because he saw troops and civilians being killed, even though he often saw that. Well, that's all!