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Control_FREAK
Control_FREAKLv41yr
2023-05-11 22:15

I read I read the whole thing. After 10 chaps my mind just go silent mode...then as the chaps progress it just remained without emotions. Not to exaggerate but the ff is idk time consuming if u ask. Worth to read...No. Bing chilling is intense in this one. If you have already mind-bonked by MTL ffs then Congo ..I welcome to hell. If not then newbies stay away. The MC is typical bing-chilling protagonist. He would go jade beauty and stuff. People may go pretty boi and stuff on him. Sometimes I even qstion my sanity well whatever. Many grammatical errors. Low translation quality. If you are brave enough...you can read it few chaps..then leave it. And if you think it's interesting then...I have a doctors number I can share it you. Overall experience: Ok, One time read is applicable. Ps. A quick remainder. Not forcing anyone to read this but try it yourself some few chaps. Not like it, then leave it. Cause your own experience is what matters. Still be warned. Hope you guys have wonderful day馃憤

Hogwarts: Start Fusion Phoenix Bloodline

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kenzel
kenzelLv5

I who have subjected myself in testing many different poisons(Chinese Novel) have already grasp a portion of the Dao of Poison Resistance. I think I can handle this one...wish me luck and I wish you luck my fellow Poison Testers.

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NightCrown
NightCrownLv14

Story might be good, but it's unreadable. Grammar 馃ぎ馃ぎ馃ぎ

1yr
Roktah
RoktahLv15

the synopsis alone made me feel sick to my stomach. seems like a face slapping novel and i'd guess its a chinese translation.

1yr
Guy_Slade
Guy_SladeLv4

The FF story is decent, the MC has a system that lets him merge bloodlines into his own, which he uses to become stronger, the house he has been sorted in doesn't become the MC's total personality is great, and the fact he is a fairly interesting MC helps. As far as the system goes the way the points are awarded is not too fast or slow so we can see the MC grow at a decent pace without it being overwhelming but not so slow it is boring to read. As far as the translation goes the names of some spells, locations and people are translated wrong, but anyone who has read HP will know what they are actually ment to be, so it is still pretty easy to read. As far as the face slapping goes some of it exists but it flows well decently rather than the usual forced senarios we usually end up getting with face slapping. As of chapter 130 I am enjoying this novel and would recommend it.

1yr
I_am_Silent
I_am_SilentLv2

CHINA, enough said. LALALALALALA

1yr
Pillsaint
PillsaintLv15

grammar and sentence structire makes the story unreadable.

1yr
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

Here is the hack that allows me translate this mtl into readable thing in chatGPT. Here are the updated 7 rules of conversion according to the Harry Potter theme (7ROCAHPT): 1. Translate the text from its original language to English and check for any grammatical mistakes. Ensure that the sentences make sense and are in tune with the Harry Potter world. 2. Increase the word count by additionally 300 words by incorporating Harry Potter-related words and themes. 3. Use theme-related words, such as using "trolls" instead of "giants," to ensure the text is in tune with the Harry Potter world. 4. Increase the number of paragraphs, if possible, to make the text more readable and engaging. 5. Change the sentence structure to be in tune with the Harry Potter world theme. 6. Add additional details wherever possible to make emotions and interactions more in tune with the Harry Potter world. 7. Do not omit or delete any kind of information before or after the conversion. .

1yr
Mitchell_Keays
Mitchell_KeaysLv3

you suck.

1yr
Phantom4212
Phantom4212Lv14

I have read this story already and I will read it again start of 1st year chapter 8 2nd year chapter 134 3rd year chapter 157 4th year chapter 252 5th year chapter 301 6th year chapter 358 7th year chapter 425 Professor year 1 chapter 462 Professor year 2 chapter 613

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