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Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv21yr
2023-06-08 15:21

character development has been rushed a little, but you can fix it in the future, except that the universe and fiction are beautiful (it would be very nice if MC starts to degenerate as he gains power and wealth more soldiers more gold more women and a tyrant who rules the world like a puppeteer in the dark, though perfect finish

Lord Raven's Court

SlothfulChronicler
4.8
201 Chs

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Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

and a happy ending

1yr
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SlothfulChronicler
SlothfulChroniclerAuthor

Thanks for the review. About the character development... there is actually none, or none too drastic at least, so far. The real "character development" will happen at the latter parts of the novel. You might have confused the MC's two sides of being both nervous (to make the suspense for readers) and sly whenever he's faced with problems. Although, if you're talking about other characters, then I really indeed have to improve my character development. Anyway, thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!

Sagvey_Ay:and a happy ending
1yr
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Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to read this beautiful story (I wish you success, my friend)

SlothfulChronicler:Thanks for the review. About the character development... there is actually none, or none too drastic at least, so far. The real "character development" will happen at the latter parts of the novel. You might have confused the MC's two sides of being both nervous (to make the suspense for readers) and sly whenever he's faced with problems. Although, if you're talking about other characters, then I really indeed have to improve my character development. Anyway, thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!
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SlothfulChronicler
SlothfulChroniclerAuthor

Yahallo, readers! This is the shameless newbie author of this novel rating his own work. I hope you support this endeavor of mine because I really do like writing and reading medieval stuff, and I'm a weeb, so why not add some fantasy too? Anyway, I hope you enjoy my work, and please let me know how can I improve my writing. It will be greatly appreciated by me! P.S: For those readers who first saw the older draft of LRC, please re-download this newer version as I'll be deleting the old one in a day or two. I made a new one because I am participating on thr WSA Contest, so please do support me if you like my work!

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niko_jeyk22
niko_jeyk22Lv2

I came into this book when hunting for books with #Historical tags. When I read the prologue, I wasn't anticipating much, but little did I know it would hook me. I enjoyed the novel's depiction of war preparations, as well as the realistic description of topography and defensive fortifications. I also admire how meticulous you are when it comes to details. I felt sorry for the peasants harmed by the battle, which is fantastic because I enjoy a scenarios that allows me to get part of it. I am just looking forward to seeing the outcome of the impending conflict. [img=proud]

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Daoist0ccPtW
Daoist0ccPtWLv14

It has potential, I hope the MC has some ambition. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Nightdark4321
Nightdark4321Lv14

I found gold🏆⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️

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AuntMel
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Good writing. I like how detailed the military and political elements are.

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BakaAsta
BakaAstaLv2

Compared to most novels in this platform, this is exceptionally well-written

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Mays_Jays
Mays_JaysLv3

Author recommended this novel to me irl... time to see this "masterpiece" of his lol

1yr
Ainsley_sama
Ainsley_samaLv1

Wonderful writing for an amateur. Keep it up, author.

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m_P3rch
m_P3rchLv15

Amazing novel. Intriguing story, wonderful writing quality, colorful battle scenes. None of those BOOM BAM SLASH SHING Abominations in battles. Reminds me of an actual book, which is why I love it. But I have to warn, that if you can not handle discriptive novels (not the one, where everything explained in dialogues, but where narrator is a majority of storytelling), then you might want to skip this. But I still encourage you to try it out, since this novel is wonderful

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Pitter_patter_Pitt
Pitter_patter_PittLv1

Amongst the few novels on this platform that is worthy of a hardcopy print. Heck, it felt more like reading a real book than a Webnovel. Definitely recommended.

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