Item: The Eternal Family
Rating: 2.2
Author: Bibongsensei

BibongsenseiLv41yr

2023-06-28 11:39

at first volume its was gold, but after that it plummet down 👇 everything goes disarray after he return back to past ...1. he got two personalities2. ace the mc's past becomes conqueror ... and from how it explain in novel it was simply a psychopath 3. he forcefully unlock his gift to have the gift of her aunt..(his aunt gift is clone... a useless one at that... a clone that if the clone die he will die too.. basically a weakness)idiotic right?and why does he want the clone so much that he even forcefully open his gift just to have that fck*ng clone??? and my prediction is to be cuck by his own clone...haysss

The Eternal Family

FamishedGod

4.0

168 Chs

Liked by 21 people

Replies17

FamishedGodAuthor

Clone won't cuck him, he had his plans but the idea was a flop, it's not always going to be a straight line to victory after all. And I have made that part more clear by editing the chapters.

1yr

BibongsenseiLv4

then, why does he wants the clone so much?

FamishedGod:Clone won't cuck him, he had his plans but the idea was a flop, it's not always going to be a straight line to victory after all. And I have made that part more clear by editing the chapters.

1yr

FamishedGodAuthor

He could use it to go to the outside world while his true self cared for his main woman. let the clone build an influence, go learn more about life than just be a shut in prince... Of course the clone will have its own woman too, that was supposed to be the story, but something unexpexted happened...

Bibongsensei:then, why does he wants the clone so much?

1yr

BibongsenseiLv4

ohhhh °0° tell me!tell me! what happen im a good reader hehehehe

FamishedGod:He could use it to go to the outside world while his true self cared for his main woman. let the clone build an influence, go learn more about life than just be a shut in prince... Of course the clone will have its own woman too, that was supposed to be the story, but something unexpexted happened...

1yr

FamishedGodAuthor

Go read lil boy, Famished men can dine here, we do not, I repeat, We do not disappoint.

Bibongsensei:ohhhh °0° tell me!tell me! what happen im a good reader hehehehe

1yr

BibongsenseiLv4

i got u man! 😎👌

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1yr

Daoist_CultureLv15

Great, that clone is still like a thorn in my brain. Girls for a more clone!? All for the true mc! And btw Im.about to re read the story since i forgot some stuff hehe.

1yr

FamishedGodAuthor

Uhm, do give comments, grammar is still a work in progress though...They say my new chaps ar grammatically nice.And dont ask who they are, becz they = me.And you should join our discord btw[img=thinking]

Daoist_Culture:Great, that clone is still like a thorn in my brain. Girls for a more clone!? All for the true mc! And btw Im.about to re read the story since i forgot some stuff hehe.

1yr

Daoist_CultureLv15

Sure, I ll do that tomorrow. 11pm here right now and I need some sleep hehe 😅

FamishedGod:Uhm, do give comments, grammar is still a work in progress though...They say my new chaps ar grammatically nice.And dont ask who they are, becz they = me.And you should join our discord btw[img=thinking]

1yr

Kw0zLv14

Stupid idea to give the clone women. Idiot.

1yr

FamishedGodAuthor

Clone and mc is like same person. Hivemind. And cline wint come close to his main women.

Kw0z:Stupid idea to give the clone women. Idiot.

1yr

Kw0zLv14

Doesn’t really matter. Giving someone else a harem besides your MC is just not a good idea overall.

FamishedGod:Clone and mc is like same person. Hivemind. And cline wint come close to his main women.

1yr

Jheydi327Lv14

Bruhh a Bad Idea... Why would you make the clone if in the end you would just make them fuse with each other??... It would better if the Original has the full control of the clone... like a avatar some sort. . But a Conscious Clone? .. Bruh not my Cup of tea

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1yr

FamishedGodAuthor

Not a concious clone though. It is like one mind in two body.The Clone is actually being used very well.

Jheydi327:Bruhh a Bad Idea... Why would you make the clone if in the end you would just make them fuse with each other??... It would better if the Original has the full control of the clone... like a avatar some sort. . But a Conscious Clone? .. Bruh not my Cup of tea

1yr

RiLi88Lv11

I havent read the Novel but concious clone meaning that the clone has sentient and its really bad idea and sounds wierd...though some Author could deliver the story well but its quite risky coz many possesive readers out there including me...🤣😅😅...but its for you to decide as its your own story and you know better...I have a questionis the clone women not the MC women?is the MC women not the clone Women?can the MC touch the clone women?...I am asking this question after reading your replied above which said "the Clone will have its own women"...I saw this novel long ago but contemplating whether to read it or not because of that comment and come here again because I saw DAOIST_CULTURE reading list which stated "the best of the best" ...🙏

FamishedGod:Not a concious clone though. It is like one mind in two body.The Clone is actually being used very well.

1yr

FamishedGodAuthor

Clone is rather irrelevant in the end. It doesn't touch MC women and in the end, both are the same people who share one consciousness. Anyway, even then, clone appears at most in some 5-7 chaps too and is not that big of a thing.Do not worry since the clone hadn't been a bad thing in the end.

RiLi88:I havent read the Novel but concious clone meaning that the clone has sentient and its really bad idea and sounds wierd...though some Author could deliver the story well but its quite risky coz many possesive readers out there including me...🤣😅😅...but its for you to decide as its your own story and you know better...I have a questionis the clone women not the MC women?is the MC women not the clone Women?can the MC touch the clone women?...I am asking this question after reading your replied above which said "the Clone will have its own women"...I saw this novel long ago but contemplating whether to read it or not because of that comment and come here again because I saw DAOIST_CULTURE reading list which stated "the best of the best" ...🙏

1yr

RiLi88Lv11

Thank you for responding...already started reading and hopefully you won't get offended by my opinion in the comment...🙏🙏🙏 Its only my personal oponion and other might think otherwise...🙏

FamishedGod:Clone is rather irrelevant in the end. It doesn't touch MC women and in the end, both are the same people who share one consciousness. Anyway, even then, clone appears at most in some 5-7 chaps too and is not that big of a thing.Do not worry since the clone hadn't been a bad thing in the end.

1yr

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Take this as a question and answer section. About 100 chaps in, I am sure where the story is headed and I'll answer some possible questions. - Will there be a Harem? Of course. -How big is the Harem? Very big but Mc's inner circle will only have some women. - Will there be Yuri?No, you may rest assured.- Will Mc get Ntred? No, Mc only steal, no get stolen. - Will it have a consistent Fantasy Power system? Absolutely, I love that thing! - Will the clone touch Mc Women? Absolutely No. not even a harmless handshake! You can ask more questions below

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