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KahaniKiDunya
KahaniKiDunyaLv111yr
2023-10-20 02:52

A good story so far (200 chaps) The thing that bothers me is why is the translator using such scholarly Shakespearean English? Simple English with correct editing would be be lovely enough.

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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

So true! So awkward to read.

Namasaya
NamasayaLv15

Agreed and it doesn't work here because they have different levels of education and to me at least when they all start speaking like this it's like they are trying to force a noble tone on everyone

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