Namasaya

I see we're doing the thing where we're multiplying numbers by 10

see I knew it because I know military time here but it is strange to see it said as 17 p.m. instead of 1700

I really wish that people would review these books when they finished them. because there's no way this story ended away it did and no one was upset about it imagine having to go through read and pay for $782 chapters of a story only for them to basically drop the story with little to no conclusions besides just confirming who committed the major crime in the story. They don't even properly catch the person They just solve everything in the last two chapters with some Deus ex machina character who shows up as a surprise ally when he was being portrayed as a villain and decides to give him their information they need to catch the people who killed the ML's parents for no reason mind you and you have to understand right This is a meticulous villain or at least that's the way they've been portrayed the entire time to the point that every time the main characters are investigating the crime of the ML's parentasdeath they are thwarted and monitored by this villain wide range of accomplices. But all of a sudden we're supposed to believe that at the end someone who is there when they are making plans and plots have a recording of them making the plans and plots and the villain wasn't keeping an eye on them wasn't doing anything to stop them wasn't suspicious when all of a sudden his family is sent out of the country. additionally once again why do you people write system novels If you're not going to maintain a system for the entire story They had a part where she complete her go she changed her fate and then the system tells her oh well you changed your fate I didn't say anything about you changed into horrible deaths that's going to happen to your brothers Oh if you want to do that you might have to sacrifice your life to save them but you can only do one life for one life so you can only sacrifice yourself to save one of your siblings so she's gloomy about that for some dozen chapters. next thing you know nothing's ever really brought up about it again except for her occasionally going into a daze or reacting exaggeratedly to one of her siblings wanting to become a racer because God knows they didn't actually go anywhere with that it's the system almost never speaks again It talks a big talk about her having to do new quest and everything like that the system literally never speaks to her again after it tells her that she cannot change the fate of her brothers without like a significant sacrifice or a lot of work. It completely negates the point of it even being brought up In fact then putting that in there was such a colossal waste of time that it must have wasted like a hundred or so the last 300 chapters because she's freaking out and overreacting and it keeps them like coming up randomly in the in the plot and then we have a bunch of villain not villains show up in these last 300 chapters and that's also unnecessary if I understand they might not have known they were going to end a story but I don't know why it seems so hard for them to write a proper epilogue to deal the fact they're going to end the story ahead of time especially given the fact that people are paying per chapter to read these stories. It sucks even more because the main characters don't even get married before the end They just said we're going to choose wedding dates and her brothers are surprised that they didn't know about this beforehand in the story ends. It leaves out everything about the issue she was having for grandmother her father I guess was meant to have his little clothes in statements after he tried to refund her for some stuff her grandmother did but they made such a big deal about oh we're going to see you fail because you've cut off with the rest of your family we didn't see any conclusion to that. there's no conclusion to the people who chased her or monitored her back on the island where the ML's parents died. there is a bet between her and the ML grandfather and that's never even come close to finish him because she was supposed to grow her company big enough to compete with their company and she's been dealing with people trying to sabotage her almost since a time she made to bet her grandparents her ML's aunt who's trying to cover up the murder just ran a little people who think they can hit on her or they could get her into bed. it's so unsatisfactory and it's really a shame cuz I was having fun with this one It was a little different and I really need the offers to start understand your own limits cuz none of them ever seem to write out a plot so when they lose their motivation to continue writing they can't even put their story together properly it's like they put like their plot summary as their final chapter and that's it.

I was really looking forward to kind of enjoying wanting to low-key protagonist type stories but I had to stop reading it because for some reason this offer is incredibly focused on describing a 7-year-old girl sexually. That's not even including the fact that the offer clearly has a p*ss fetish and has decided to inflict all of us with it after I found out that the girl even at 18 is still just randomly peeing on people even when making out with her boyfriend I had to stop cuz it's distracting especially when it's so blatantly obvious that it's not has anything to do with the plot it's just a fetish so if you had told me that maybe this has something to do with some power she was going to come into in the future that would be tolerable But like this absolutely not.

who took their own life The Fourth Prince or whoever they scrounged up as a scapegoat for this particular crime it's not very clear and if it is the four Prince then is it supposed to be in the future like the zhao family?

I believe Perfect World is the novel that this story is based in and Shi Hap is the main character of that novel. this is basically a fanfic from the perfect world story.

not them calling him the urine emperor

I don't normally mind it but this is a second time they've done this whole I broke into a special location and you all are eating my leftovers and remains kind of plot and we could be doing a story about something anything else really

the museum how the system just cleverly avoids telling him what level he's at so neither he nor us no what level he's actually at could be Saint could be beyond Saint could be even more

I mean to be fair for some reason the system has enabled him to be unable to see the value of the things around him. I heard that or the fact that he is unfamiliar with cultivation in that world he's not aware of the fact that everything he handles has some sort of spiritual energy to it