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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv141yr
2023-11-28 14:22

Load of problems wirh this story. starting from the creepy 1 year old. sadly his eyes are the least creepiest thing. This author has nice ideas but all his stories end up in the gutter quick for really weird decisions the MC makes. and mostly the MCs personality which mostly is non existent in all of his stories. just some shadow of a person you can't seem to care enough for to invest in. having six eyes and talking and fighting when you're 1 year old isn't being unique, it doesn't give life to this story, it ruins it.

Naruto: Hatake's Demon Son.

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3.8
79 Chs

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TeraBaapHuMai
TeraBaapHuMaiLv3

Oh god, again this author with god level ideas, but chinese level execution. It's so bad. It's even worse than his other ff's. If anyone can make it past chapter 9, and still find it good, you are not right up there and need medical attention asap

1yr

Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv12

This is trash.. can't read past 10 chapter;s.. imagine ninja's acting like 3rd grade bandits with dead brain cell.. yeah you get what's you goona see in this story.. danzo kills his own subordinate just cause he annoyed with hiruzen.. a random spy try to kill mc on his own just to hope to please the chio of the sand(higher up of village) .. everyone acting like 3rd rate villain and anti-mc who just want mc to die.. it's been long since I see such xinxia-like story....

1yr
LEGENDARYDRAGON
LEGENDARYDRAGONLv1

The Mc beat a High Chunin in the age of 1 …. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ……….. ………

1yr
Dante_Giordano
Dante_GiordanoLv14

I dont have anything to say except that this is amazing. I haven’t found a single demon slayer fic with a demon mc and even then most demon slayer fics are just power fantasies

1yr
iModex
iModexLv4

Looks great till now , i would love if he had kokushibo's personality as well, i don't want him to have a personality like naruto's one.,

1yr
zxerxys
zxerxysLv4

very good . . . .

1yr
Kaguyume
KaguyumeLv3

author, I just want to convey that this story is very good and I really admire it, I hope this story continues and keep up the enthusiasm for updates

10mth
LtKaiser
LtKaiserLv14

Outside of all the xianxia like tropes littered in thr story, the biggest issue I have is the lack of reaction to the MC's six eyes when people see him for the first time... Why bother making MC be born with 6 eyes if you aren't going to adress it and writer about people's reactions to it.... This lack of minute details severely impedes our immersion in the story.

1yr
krokrok007
krokrok007Lv4

its one of the best op mc fanfics because the author doesnt make logicless nerfs. But if you dont like op 5 year old mc dont read it or write bad review because you have been warned.

1yr
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