Item: Naruto: Hatake's Demon Son.
Rating: 1
Author: TeraBaapHuMai

TeraBaapHuMaiLv31yr

2023-08-28 15:15

Oh god, again this author with god level ideas, but chinese level execution. It's so bad. It's even worse than his other ff's. If anyone can make it past chapter 9, and still find it good, you are not right up there and need medical attention asap

Naruto: Hatake's Demon Son.

Hkj

3.8

79 Chs

Liked by 44 people

Replies6

Ero_no_KamiLv4

thanks for your reminder

1yr

Daoist_DanLv10

I agree his concepts and first arcs are great. I'm willing to stick around for those for now and hope this one has a great second arc section as well. This story has a great foundation imo.

1yr

GENGHIS_KHANLv13

Care to explain why

1yr

Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv12

wish I could have listened to you bro... my time got wasted... but I did read upto 10 chapter's

1yr

DemonVenerable_12Lv1

Tsk Tsk- That's why you should listen to your seniors

1yr

Supreme_LeaderLv12

Agreed. The ffs havw great concepts but the execution leaves much to be desired.

1yr

Other Reviews

Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv12

This is trash.. can't read past 10 chapter;s.. imagine ninja's acting like 3rd grade bandits with dead brain cell.. yeah you get what's you goona see in this story.. danzo kills his own subordinate just cause he annoyed with hiruzen.. a random spy try to kill mc on his own just to hope to please the chio of the sand(higher up of village) .. everyone acting like 3rd rate villain and anti-mc who just want mc to die.. it's been long since I see such xinxia-like story....

1yr

LEGENDARYDRAGONLv1

The Mc beat a High Chunin in the age of 1 …. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ………. ……… ….. ……. ……….. ………

1yr

Dante_GiordanoLv14

I dont have anything to say except that this is amazing. I haven’t found a single demon slayer fic with a demon mc and even then most demon slayer fics are just power fantasies

1yr

iModexLv4

Looks great till now , i would love if he had kokushibo's personality as well, i don't want him to have a personality like naruto's one.,

1yr

zxerxysLv3

very good . . . .

1yr

KaguyumeLv3

author, I just want to convey that this story is very good and I really admire it, I hope this story continues and keep up the enthusiasm for updates

6mth

DetachedDreamerLv14

Load of problems wirh this story. starting from the creepy 1 year old. sadly his eyes are the least creepiest thing. This author has nice ideas but all his stories end up in the gutter quick for really weird decisions the MC makes. and mostly the MCs personality which mostly is non existent in all of his stories. just some shadow of a person you can't seem to care enough for to invest in. having six eyes and talking and fighting when you're 1 year old isn't being unique, it doesn't give life to this story, it ruins it.

1yr

LtKaiserLv14

Outside of all the xianxia like tropes littered in thr story, the biggest issue I have is the lack of reaction to the MC's six eyes when people see him for the first time... Why bother making MC be born with 6 eyes if you aren't going to adress it and writer about people's reactions to it.... This lack of minute details severely impedes our immersion in the story.

11mth

krokrok007Lv4

its one of the best op mc fanfics because the author doesnt make logicless nerfs. But if you dont like op 5 year old mc dont read it or write bad review because you have been warned.

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