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Bapabooey
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2023-06-05 10:29

Right off the bat, Author throws Yuri into this with the MC’s mom being married to another woman. I comment about how I don’t like Yuri and I won’t be continuing reading the novel. I say it’s dumb that a lot of Authors include it, since all it is, especially in Harems, is your woman, cheating on you with another woman, specifically your other women. I find it dumb and stupid. I did not read further than that, so I am unaware if he will introduce it into the relationship with the MCs own harem, but I can tell you, that if the author is willing to put it into his novel, it’ll eventually find it’s way into the MCs harem. Only a matter of time. Anyways, after that, I went about my business. Come to find out, the author didn’t take it too well that I criticized his novel and replied to my comment saying he didn’t want my single brain cell to read his novel anyways. (I’ll be posting the screen shots of conversation in this review too. It’ll probably be taken down, because the author doesn’t want people to know he’s a sore loser and can’t take people not liking his novel or critiquing it.

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TheFanficGod
TheFanficGodAuthor

No, I will not delete it. Instead I will pin it so people can see it. I don't want people who cannot even read my warnings to read my novel. They probably be scared away bu this review. So, thank you.

Zonum_J
Zonum_JLv11

As a person who doesn’t like yuri either, I didn’t start reading this, bc he did warn us in the synopsis. Always read it and tags b4 actually reading it and then dissing it, I mean…

Zonum_J
Zonum_JLv11

Btw your other works don’t have it right? I was thinking of checking them out and then annoyingly point out plot holes like any good person should.

TheFanficGod:No, I will not delete it. Instead I will pin it so people can see it. I don't want people who cannot even read my warnings to read my novel. They probably be scared away bu this review. So, thank you.
TheFanficGod
TheFanficGodAuthor

None of my works has Yuri.

Zonum_J:Btw your other works don’t have it right? I was thinking of checking them out and then annoyingly point out plot holes like any good person should.
mauro_godoy
mauro_godoyLv10

Este si

TheFanficGod:None of my works has Yuri.
mauro_godoy
mauro_godoyLv10

Este si

TheFanficGod:None of my works has Yuri.
ForgottenHope
ForgottenHopeLv4

well this is not true anymore cuss this one does.

TheFanficGod:None of my works has Yuri.
TheFanficGod
TheFanficGodAuthor

Welcome to the reads but cannot understand club.

ForgottenHope:well this is not true anymore cuss this one does.
Loophus
LoophusLv5

how did you get yours to look all blue like that

Bapabooey:
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Bapabooey
BapabooeyLv15

When you touch anywhere while reading a novel, there’s a menu like option that pops up, go to the one that says background, at the top, then select what color you want

Loophus:how did you get yours to look all blue like that
Cliffhanger_Mdfaka
Cliffhanger_MdfakaLv4

so a throuple

TheFanficGod:Welcome to the reads but cannot understand club.
Zenon00125
Zenon00125Lv2

I don't know why people warm up to Yuri in the harem, I've always felt threatened by other men, not by women, especially harems, this would just make the girls' relationships more harmonious and make sense because what's normal is them always fighting or wanting to kill each other like in imperial harem drama so I prefer yuri than this and in a way that makes sense why I will never understand why all the harem is harmonious which doesn't even make sense and as if the girls are robots

Incommensurable
IncommensurableLv10

shut your mouth ( yuri is NTR ) 👎👎🖕🖕

Zenon00125:I don't know why people warm up to Yuri in the harem, I've always felt threatened by other men, not by women, especially harems, this would just make the girls' relationships more harmonious and make sense because what's normal is them always fighting or wanting to kill each other like in imperial harem drama so I prefer yuri than this and in a way that makes sense why I will never understand why all the harem is harmonious which doesn't even make sense and as if the girls are robots
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Sil3nt_1
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Bapabooey
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Sil3nt_1:
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Umbra_Khan
Umbra_KhanLv4

Hey author you should make a genuinely good yuri harem novel out of spite just for the people that are slamming this novel xD

TheFanficGod:No, I will not delete it. Instead I will pin it so people can see it. I don't want people who cannot even read my warnings to read my novel. They probably be scared away bu this review. So, thank you.
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