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Hiroton
HirotonLv141yr
2024-01-15 00:22

The writing overall is pretty decent 👌. But for those like who find it a big turn-off to read this fic, I recommend you don't read it and that the author should give warning in his description. there is plenty of Yuri and ntr in the works and how can it even be said to be a harem when it's clearly polyamory? Some of his girls are into other girls and ask him to get other girls for them, while those new girls also like other girls and he helps them willingly to cuck himself...

Space whales? Nope rather deal with devils.

Azazyel
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Hiroton
HirotonLv14

For example, his first two women are serafall and sona from dxd. Do I even need to explain that serafall only joined so she could taste sona herself? serafall then asks him to get more magical girls so she can devour them. So they go to madoka magical and in the process of getting the new girls, it is also learned some them are into other girls, so we all know where this is going....

1yr
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Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

ah that seems like a shttier version of Mikael's harem in "Rapturous Rhapsody", at least there are explanations to them having relationship with each other, and Mikael and the others address many issues regarding the harem which is more than I could say on a lot of harem fics.

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2TIME
2TIMELv12

thank you

Hiroton:For example, his first two women are serafall and sona from dxd. Do I even need to explain that serafall only joined so she could taste sona herself? serafall then asks him to get more magical girls so she can devour them. So they go to madoka magical and in the process of getting the new girls, it is also learned some them are into other girls, so we all know where this is going....
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Deippy_Deippy
Deippy_DeippyLv13

Thanks for the warning I hate stories like that👍

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