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It's practically impossible to read. There are too many run-on sentences and a large underutilization of punctuation. I can read through stuff like machine translation just fine, but this had me within the first 2 chapters. My recommendation for the author is to find someone to proofread your work or just use grammar software.

The writing overall is pretty decent 👌. But for those like who find it a big turn-off to read this fic, I recommend you don't read it and that the author should give warning in his description. there is plenty of Yuri and ntr in the works and how can it even be said to be a harem when it's clearly polyamory? Some of his girls are into other girls and ask him to get other girls for them, while those new girls also like other girls and he helps them willingly to cuck himself...

If your a yuri lover then this is your piece of cake.

So far I've enjoyed what I have read. Question though since the MC has Soul edge will he gain his own set of armor like the past/previous users of soul edge?

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Question for the author; is this the same story that goes by the name lewd worm cyoa on your patreon?

this is how you write a good non confusing world travel fanfic.... ps plz have them go to fairytail next it is truely wifu heaven