Review Detail of Jaffaaaa in The Magi-Tech Academy

The book sounds very interesting. You have a great idea and I hope you will succeed in writing it. First of all I like the worldbuilding. But in my opinion you described unnec things in to much unnessary and things that are impor tant came to short. But that does not stop what you thought of to come out good. It would be even better if you checked everything and edited it. I would advice you to take your time and look through it. Nevertheless nice idea and good Cover. Keep up your work.