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Then just write Son of Atlas

Go on my latest review. I will continue there. Thank you my only friend

Hey there. I will upload my work from now on here. There were problems with contract so I have to start again. Wish me luck.

Bro i will switch Accounts. I will tell you the new one

Give me your power stones my one and only friend

Mommy Artemis

So first of all nice job choosing the topic. Readers live that and the fan base will be big. It’s a nice and interesting concept. You try to catch the reader and in some parts you succeeded. I just see Major problem. And that’s the length of everything. It’ s to short. You could give many things more emotions and descriptions. If you do that it will be even funnier reading ya book. Another problem that can be fixed fast is the language. Here and there sometimes the sentences does not make so much sense. But with just a bit of editing it will be better. Keep up your work author

It sounds a bit weird.