5 stars cause I didn't see the "harem" tag, and I'm in a good mood.

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Am the author so my review will certainly be biased but I really think this book deserves a 5 stars review, my opinion at least, I put a lot of time and effort into it and made sure to smooth Any rough edges, plus I learned from my previous 2 books and applied my experience here. So I hope you enjoy it.

it's good story I can't wait for more chapters.

Good story with a good mc and solid world building, the only issues I have is that they writing can (only sometimes) be a bit iffy, and that the powerset of our MC is hard to understand. I personally didn’t like it very much when he got a summon feature to call forth other characters as his “followers” but luckily it hasn’t played too big of a role.

Great story… but takes too long for updates otherwise the rating would be higher

it's an alright story not a fan of the summoning

English is not my native language. I will write what shortcomings I noticed in this fanfic. The first shortcoming is the multiple strengthening in battle. If anyone does not know, this nonsense was invented by the Chinese. No one becomes stronger in battle. All that people get from battle is experience and more effective use of their skills. The second shortcoming is the unrealistic description of the main character's thoughts. In dangerous situations, people hardly think, they just do. The solution literally appears in our heads by itself, without a path of how the solution came to us. The third shortcoming is the illogicality of the system. Blood is much more difficult to control than ice. Therefore, he should have mastered ice much earlier than the battle with the bear. Mages who control tons of water can take control of blood only during the full moon. But the main character can control blood, but cannot turn water into ice and control large amounts of water. Plus, the main character is strangely weakened. Katara was so weak at the beginning because she did not have a teacher. As soon as he appeared, her development went rapidly. The main character actually has a teacher. The system itself gives him the right moves, but he is slightly stronger than Katara (at the beginning of the series).

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Overall, I would say that this is a pretty, enjoyable avatar story. The main character is likable, and he is definitely going to get incredibly strong before the start of the main story, but he isn’t necessarily curb stomping the best of the best right away. He has some great teacher so far, and he takes advantage of that, as well as trying to use the system the best way possible. I also like the relationship he has with his family, making sure to take care of them, and teach them, his siblings, at least, and he cares greatly for his father and mother. This is much better than the usual trope where the main character sees his family as a burden, not caring about that one way, or another, or is nothing but story characters. He knows that this is the real world for him, that the people around him are more than characters from the show. Overall, I would say that the story is definitely worth at least checking out to see if it’s your cup of tea, and I think most Raiders will find it to be an entertaining read. overall, I would say that the story is definitely worth at least checking out to see if it’s your cup of tea, and I think most readers will find it to be an entertaining read.