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Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv149mth
2024-05-17 23:39

Great story… but takes too long for updates otherwise the rating would be higher

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xXTheDarkOneXx
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xXTheDarkOneXx
xXTheDarkOneXxAuthor

Thanks man, unfortunately i am busy most of the day and also i write slowly so sorry for that

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Am the author so my review will certainly be biased but I really think this book deserves a 5 stars review, my opinion at least, I put a lot of time and effort into it and made sure to smooth Any rough edges, plus I learned from my previous 2 books and applied my experience here. So I hope you enjoy it.

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