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shin_rae_miu
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2023-07-09 11:01

it is pretty good fic considering that kumo desu is very hard to create a fan fic. but I am missing that kumo desu experience. confusion is part of kumo desu. but I would like to see this fic focus more on the perspective of ocmc and mc minimizing the focus on characters that originally used for character development of the spider.

So, I'm a Dragon, What of it?

Dr_Armstrong
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Ghost_Playing
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✨Review After 10 chapters✨ ⭐️Writing Quality⭐️ [4 STARS] The writing quality certainly is good but it can’t be perfect, so I pretty much always give a 4 star in all stories I make a review on. Anyway, it isn't unreadable, as it’s actually pretty good, though you might have confused some less endowed readers (not me though) when you changed the POV without mentioning it but I saw that you already fixed that so yeah…, you will get better the more you write after all 👀 👍 👏 ⭐️Updating Stability⭐️ [4 STARS] You’ve been updating regularly but like it has been the case in this week, it could happen that you can’t upload due to some problem. So it’s 4 stars in the present time and will stay like that for the future as well. ⭐️Story Development⭐️ [5 STARS] I honestly like where the story is currently heading, as the character development seems steady while the struggle the mc faces is realistic, considering the strata he is in with his undeveloped strength. Besides that he got some pretty OP skills/Titel that pretty much guarantees that he will turn out to be a being of reality breaking proportions. 🗿 (an abomination) ⭐️Character Design⭐️ [4 STARS] Personally I’d give you 5 stars if I was nice but as I stay neutral, I will just say that your mc is certainly entertaining, EVEN if he got a bit of a screw loose, it still doesn’t mean he matches my own preferences 100% the same way it does or doesn’t for others as well. Besides that I have to admit that your character design is well made, so don't let complaints of imposters🥸demotivate you.🫠 ⭐️World Background⭐️ [5 STARS] To be honest, as this is a fanfic, the world background was already made by the original creator BUT considering on how well you presented it and the knowledge you showed off, I can certainly say you will do pretty well in this regard without any major problems, since most other Authors are good at this as well which you are too.🫨 (though, there are always exceptions as you know…) ⚡️Summary⚡️ Overall, this novel seems to have a lot of potential, with an Author that shows in-depth knowledge of the original work he made a fanfic off. Besides that we got a MC with his fair share of problems and character development, OP skills with the potential to become a being of reality breaking proportions he was always meant to be, as well as a fair share of struggles at the beginning, that he faces with his undeveloped strength in an environment that can easily erase him. Humans are prone to make mistakes, so forgive the Curious Goose Author if he makes a mistake twice since if he does it thrice, then you can make food with heavenly goose 🪿meat 🍖 and rice 🍚. 🥹 👻Personal Note👻 This review was written long ago but always got shadow banned by Webnovel, because of the word "ØPPØẞĪTÉ" that I used in this review previously. 💀 I hope this novel gets popular considering just its sheer potential. Either way, good luck 🍀 👍 ✨4,4 Overall Stars✨

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1y_the_first
1y_the_firstLv13

very good moar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Osas_Destiny_4852
Osas_Destiny_4852Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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ntw_ff
ntw_ffLv11

couldnt follow the story and did not enjoy reading it had to drop halfway

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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

Here we go... It a very good book with really intresting development. Too early to judge but I had fun till chapter 9. Acceptable writing with errors that can be ignored. Weird but fun MC and but the story got confusing at times so I suggest Author use [MC POV] [Flashback] etc to tell the traders exactly what they are reafing Question for author : Is shiraori the main girl?

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True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4

Shrimp dragon x Spider =Abomination

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The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

I am only going to quite this. "I am a barbie wyrm. In a barbie du~n~geon. Life in magic... Its fantastic! You can wash my hide, but her me~on the side~! Anahilation, death is your salvation!"

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Supper_mega
Supper_megaLv4

I have a theory Spoiler alert.... in the first phase of the novel he has some crazy potential because of his skills and title and he got it so quite easily it's probably because of wakaba he confess to wakaba the real wakaba also known as d the evil god so wakaba probably felt it amusing so she's given him some op abilities that's all I guess the novel so far is good not really super fast paced and and so far I like it I hope this continues 🙏🙏🙏

1yr
Ouroboros_Outings
Ouroboros_OutingsLv4

Exemplary ff but sometimes he gets stronger without explanation and it gets somewhat confusing

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UltimateSenpai
UltimateSenpaiLv4

eh. nemu author indo. [img=proud][img=proud]

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