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2023-06-26 02:41

Exemplary ff but sometimes he gets stronger without explanation and it gets somewhat confusing

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Dr_Armstrong
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There is an explanation: He kills ALOT of mobs offscreen and Greed steals their Skills

Ouroboros_Outings
Ouroboros_OutingsLv4

Yeah I know but maybe they should make a summary of the stronger skills so we know what creates the effects in battle and are not completely befuddled when he whips out a skill we never even knew existed

Dr_Armstrong:There is an explanation: He kills ALOT of mobs offscreen and Greed steals their Skills
Ouroboros_Outings
Ouroboros_OutingsLv4

* you (Just noticed the author tag)

Ouroboros_Outings:Yeah I know but maybe they should make a summary of the stronger skills so we know what creates the effects in battle and are not completely befuddled when he whips out a skill we never even knew existed
Dr_Armstrong
Dr_ArmstrongAuthor

Good idea, will do that with an aux chap

Ouroboros_Outings:Yeah I know but maybe they should make a summary of the stronger skills so we know what creates the effects in battle and are not completely befuddled when he whips out a skill we never even knew existed
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