Well, another review said exactly what I was thinking about the fic.
I would really like to give it 5 stars because it's really a very interesting story, but the author always makes us reread the same scene several times with different povs and that makes reading very unpleasant.
The beginning of the fic was also a little rushed which made it confusing, but things fell into place later, although this fic requires prior knowledge of several animes, webtoons and webnovels to understand the story, with the world of the MC being the most complicated because requires having read a webnovel to understand.
Working on that... I've been trying to write more in third person and include other world's plot less in the story since... it is the MC's story, not the others... I feel like I find myself impressed in the backstories for support characters alright. Therefore I somehow included them too much. Like what skills the other members have or and their reaction something like that.
Haku_OuroborosLv12
No es un fanfic de chat ?
SpelloyalLv12
English plz
Haku_Ouroboros:No es un fanfic de chat ?
Haku_OuroborosLv12
Español porfavor
Spelloyal:English plz
NeoBeeLv6
now this is what I called a review 👍not just "this is bad, don't read it, bla bla bla"