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Lazy_Fox111
Lazy_Fox111Lv41yr
2023-08-30 21:30

There are words with their first letters capitalized for no apparent reason. Some mistakes in grammar from here and there. Characters that feel childish due to amateurish dialogues and other reasons I won't bother to write. The concept is really nice but the delivery is meh. I'm neutral about political ideologies but you should really try to write them more objectively and with evidence in order to avoid unnecessary controversy with some sensitive people out there. Again, the concept is really nice but the story is not my cup of tea.

Youjo Senki: The Dacian Prince

PowerMan579
4.6
75 Chs

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DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

looking forward to the development of this story also excited because there is few youjo senki with male mc

1yr

Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

War Candy gold,women,dream,power,honor,more women,more gold.....War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible

1yr
Dawniel_Aurelio
Dawniel_AurelioLv14

as a fan of youjo senki world and a fan of kingdom building. I also liked to see what a male mc would do to world, when he has the power of his country in his hands. (Mind my English 😂)

1yr
Poseidon_1_
Poseidon_1_Lv13

I demand more! This great story makes you want to support the bad guys, nuff said.

1yr
Trafford
TraffordLv6

Ok... this is one of the rare stories as Youjo Senki fanfic with a male protagonist is indeed a very rare thing... The kingdom-building element and world-building elements are well done so it would be interesting to see how things developed. I cannot wait when the story will develop more on magic topics or some romance and so on...

1yr
AdolfHipster1945
AdolfHipster1945Lv5

There arent many Youjo Senki stories, and those that are actually good or at least decent is low, so seeing this having stable updates and good story and writing and characters is good, also not afraid of diving deeper into the lore that wasynt shown in the anime or manga is good.

1yr
ChaMy
ChaMyLv4

Confesso que não me lembro de quase nada de Youjo Senki, mas lerei mesmo assim. Usarei a wiki enquanto leio. Obrigado pela história meu compadre.

1yr
Thiarha
ThiarhaLv4

Okay man, this is the first time i see Youjo Senki Fanfic in this platform and i hope this isn't dissapointed, i didn't read it yet but i hope it's good.

1yr
CZFanficsDelta
CZFanficsDeltaLv3

give me more!!!

1yr
LittleKotava
LittleKotavaLv14

5 stars, 5 stars, 5 stars. I was a little worried it would be dropped around Chapter 55, but it's back on semi regular uploads. And trust me, it's the best fanfiction with an OC for Youjo Senki, and well, WELL is worth the wait for new chapters. I even started on fanart for this because it's so good. and the author is I iterative with the readers too. it's really good. also, Tanya's charecter is really cute. kinda reminds me of the manga Tanya. it's well done and well written. each new charecter and old feel like they belong in the bigger story.

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