One of the biggest disappointments I have ever read. The main character is completely uninteresting. He is a genius in everything and can absolutely everything ... Except being an interesting character. The rest of the characters feel like cardboard boxes, made just to exist, even if they are important and drive the story. In general, the whole story is bad, and an interesting concept and ideas do not save the story. And... that's all. I don’t know what else to write here - I didn’t go far, since there is not a single charismatic or tritely interesting character in history. I have no intention of giving this fanfic a second chance.
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True the character are kinda bland and not interesting to me too, that was just the biggest problem of author to me, the story are interesting but character are not
Yep same the characters felt bland and I was just reading a summary of the conversations
I even started to skip convos because the were boring
It's always nice to find an actually honest review of a fanfic, it gives you a good idea of what the true nature of the hole that your about to jump into.
Pues a mi no me lo parece, el problema quizás sea el poco desarrollo que tienen.
This really is a good review I can literally feel the disappointment, that's impressive
