Nikitanis

Good. Now I feel good...

Good. Now I feel good...

Thanks! Good work.

So OP! Like it! She needs it because shit is gonna find them all...

Долги юридически идут с наследством, которое можно и не принимать. Но как оно работает здесь - вопрос. Возможно сверхъестественная сторона обязывает возвращение долга даже через детей и неважно, согласны они с наследством или нет. Ну Или Десмон принял наследство и расписался не дочитав...

Well, Thor won't forget this. He's not the God of Thunder anymore, or even the God of Hammers... He's the God of the Little Spear now! Patron of little swords! God of "little snakes!" It's even curious what kind of prayers can be offered to such a unique deity... Probably NOT VERY BIG ones!

wait, who is who and what in this pair? I need to know!?!

Когда устаю переводить то да, с переводчиком)

Obviously the Girls will ignore this. Or the System will blur the picture and sound. Or they are all already sitting there with brainwashed and just don't know it. Classic.

a good fanfic would be if it was written by a good author. I'm not even sure what to write here myself, since the whole fanfic is a big hole. There are some good ideas here. But ideas alone are obviously not enough to make a good story. Otherwise, this is another story about a "Genius NOT young master" with abilities that are unknown to anyone from earth to heaven. What? He didn't become strong right away? Well, then the insurmountable wall of plot armor comes into play. so... Just try it and you'll understand what the problem is. And if not... Everyone has their own tastes, I guess?