Quick advice, in the synopsis you mention guns, I suggest you remove them since they reduce an already low immersion(since its a seclusion type novel). Im not saying my opinion im stating facts: people that read fantasy novels want to be immersed in a fantasy world and by putting things that dont match the world(guns), it usually isnt viewed well by the reader, even if it is comedy. There is a reason why modern-world cultivation novels sell less than a cultivation novel based on a proper ancient cultivation world. Hope this might help.
DamnPlotArmor
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LIKElazyvampiredemonas:To those wondering, guns or any futuristic items are not present in the story. As SPOILER His powers seem to work out of the idea of selling only that specific worlds products cheaply.
Shadow_Gamer1:it's about a Florida man in the wild,get with the program
I don't think this is helpful feedback. this isnt a standard cultivation novel. there are thousands of cultivation novels with swords sabers and spears. It is a welcome change for someone to write something new. And we are immersed in FLORIDA man taking his culture to a cultivation world. it completely fits the story to bring something like that out, even if it is just to shoot at furniture. he should make a factory for guns and train some plants and unicorns on how to shoot at squirrels and accidentally break his neighbors window..... that is exactly the kind of ridiculousness I expect to see in this particular take of a cultivation world.
GreatDaoOfKarma:trashy young master : "YOU ARE COURTING DEATH!!!" Florida man *Shoots* : "Headshot!"image
The comment was made 4 months ago. This novel is roughly 4-5 months old. Of course, he can't read chapter 100 or later. XD
Othy:Someone hasn’t read very far.
DamnPlotArmor:The comment was made 4 months ago. This novel is roughly 4-5 months old. Of course, he can't read chapter 100 or later. XD