webnovel
Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor1yr
2023-04-18 21:48

*The usual shameless Autor Review* But since I'm here, let me give you an overview of the Novel: -This Novel is about a young man and his search in discovering the secrets of a completely different world, with the stakes rising every chapter. -As of now there are 3 Volumes and 150 available chapters, though since this is the new version, we're slowly going through each and every one of them again. -I said this before, but I'll be re-editing each chapter and adding more content to make the experience smoother and also to give it a different feel for old readers, and if you're a new one, you only profit by having more well-constructed chapters. -Schedule is 1 chapter per day, but since I am posting the edited chapters, it's 2 chapters per day, until we go back to the latest chapter, posted in the old version. -Chapter size is about 1500 words, but with the extra edit, it becomes 2K+ words per chapter. -For now, I'm posting 5 chapters per day, but this will likely end soon, same for the chapter size, once we catch up with the old version, we'll return to 1.5K words per chapter. -Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy this work!

Liked by 17 people

LIKE
Replies31
VenerableChingchow
VenerableChingchowLv14

I'm reading both of your fanfics...and both have wonderful writing...so I'll have high expectations for this one... 👍

Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

They told me it was cool!

VenerableChingchow:I'm reading both of your fanfics...and both have wonderful writing...so I'll have high expectations for this one... 👍
Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14

Harem…?

Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

This story is almost definitely not Harem

Ghost_Playing:Harem…?
Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14

Yes!

Follower_of_Abadom:This story is almost definitely not Harem
Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

Romance will take a long while as well, so don't expect anything for now, there have been interactions where the mc is aware of things going on around him, but he's just going with it for now and not actively persuing anything

Ghost_Playing:Yes!
image
VenerableChingchow
VenerableChingchowLv14

It is... I've read till chapter 30...and this is... once again a wonderful novel.. 👍

Follower_of_Abadom:They told me it was cool!
Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

I'm glad you enjoyed it, there isn't as much action here as my other novels, but it's mostly due to the Arc, we are in a growth and discovery Arc. Though I can't promise much in the future xd

VenerableChingchow:It is... I've read till chapter 30...and this is... once again a wonderful novel.. 👍
MagikarpBombado
MagikarpBombadoLv6

hey vlh. vc tem que aumentar a meta de Power stones. pois pelo visto, estão doando mais, assim vc vai ficar muito cansado postando capítulos, incluindo os outros livros...

Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

Eu to aumentando de pouco em pouco, mas como eu falei no ultimo chap, eu vou parar com Power Stone goals ate a gente chegar no chap 150 exatamente por causa disso

MagikarpBombado:hey vlh. vc tem que aumentar a meta de Power stones. pois pelo visto, estão doando mais, assim vc vai ficar muito cansado postando capítulos, incluindo os outros livros...
MagikarpBombado
MagikarpBombadoLv6

a ok :v e boa novel aí vlh, mas ainda gosto mais da zero fate hehehehehe

Follower_of_Abadom:Eu to aumentando de pouco em pouco, mas como eu falei no ultimo chap, eu vou parar com Power Stone goals ate a gente chegar no chap 150 exatamente por causa disso
MagikarpBombado
MagikarpBombadoLv6

parabéns por ser contratado vlh.(não sei se é assim ou como funciona isso kkkk).

Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

Obrigado! Eu ainda to aprendendo o esquema, mas ate agora ta fluindo bem imagino eu

MagikarpBombado:parabéns por ser contratado vlh.(não sei se é assim ou como funciona isso kkkk).
image
_blank69_
_blank69_Lv15

Yumi seems cute tho i hope he isnt totally gonna ignore her or cast her aside romance is okay with 1 or 2 just no harem

Follower_of_Abadom:Romance will take a long while as well, so don't expect anything for now, there have been interactions where the mc is aware of things going on around him, but he's just going with it for now and not actively persuing anything
Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

another one found, how tf 2 isnt harem

_blank69_:Yumi seems cute tho i hope he isnt totally gonna ignore her or cast her aside romance is okay with 1 or 2 just no harem
Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

So far she's been relevant enough Iguess

_blank69_:Yumi seems cute tho i hope he isnt totally gonna ignore her or cast her aside romance is okay with 1 or 2 just no harem
Blanket
BlanketLv15

Haven't seen any reviews actually mentioning whats good about the story. Like what kind of protaganist is he? Kind of get a chub for neutral evil protags... And I don't want to read 100s of chapter just to find out he has a hero conplex 😩

Follower_of_Abadom
Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

This is one of my problems with the reviews, people just use emogis and call it a day. If it helps Dale isn't a Hero and he doesn't have a Hero complex, he does move to help those around him, but he won't say: "I need to help those random people on the other side of the city!" He may save someone that is close to him, but that's it

Blanket:Haven't seen any reviews actually mentioning whats good about the story. Like what kind of protaganist is he? Kind of get a chub for neutral evil protags... And I don't want to read 100s of chapter just to find out he has a hero conplex 😩
MagikarpBombado
MagikarpBombadoLv6

cara. precisamos de capítulos na Zero fate ;---;

Follower_of_Abadom:This is one of my problems with the reviews, people just use emogis and call it a day. If it helps Dale isn't a Hero and he doesn't have a Hero complex, he does move to help those around him, but he won't say: "I need to help those random people on the other side of the city!" He may save someone that is close to him, but that's it
yb48
yb48Lv14

is this novel not a harem? i hate novels that have harem potential with mc having multiple love interests but the author screwed it up not liking harems lol.

Follower_of_Abadom:This is one of my problems with the reviews, people just use emogis and call it a day. If it helps Dale isn't a Hero and he doesn't have a Hero complex, he does move to help those around him, but he won't say: "I need to help those random people on the other side of the city!" He may save someone that is close to him, but that's it
Other Reviews
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

I really, really love this Book. Some of the Points I subjectively love about this Book( Up to Chapter 56 I read about): 1. The Mc is more or less a loner. Sure, he has friends, family, and all that, but in the Game, he stays alone most of the time and doesn't share everything he has with everyone he meets like in so many other MMORPG Video Games Novels. 2. Mc isn't a dense Idiot, but a normal Dude. Like, in most Chinese Novels the Mc is just plain Stupid. I am talking about 20 IQ Dump. And it is also shown that everyone now acts like a normal Human Being. There are Idiots in there. Very Intelligent People, Normal People, etc like it should be. 3. By God is it satisfying to see that the Author thought about most things and is intelligent enough to leave some things uncertain so he can re-write or write them at all in the future. Like when he limited Information about Scaling and Ranks/Grades. ETC ETC. Don't wanna write down everything because I ain't got that much time xD. Wanna read further. Also... Spoiler:(Maybe) I got some ideas about why he got his Powers etc. Obviously, this got something to do with People getting their Stats transferred after they hit Level 100 to the Real World and as it is shown they gotta accomplish something before they hit Level, or else their Level 100 Acc is worthless. Maybe the more they are engaged in the Main Story and the more they did the more Percentage they get to Transcende Humanity? Like when you get 50% you got a 50% Chance to get your Acc "transferred" to the Real World. Or maybe just a few Stats. Or maybe you just get to Awaken like you can start to Train like the Mc but you don't get your whole Acc. It is also concerning how the Company always reacts soooooo fast...almost Inhuman? Is the Company even Human, or is it one entity or many? Bro,I got so many questions and theories( mostly because I have read them in other NovelsxD) Well, all in all, I love it. It gives me peace of mind that there are still people out there writing Stories that didn't just graduate from kindergarten. Peace out[img=recommend]

Related Stories

The Extra’s Survival: Logging into the Game Master System!

The Apocalypse descended as the world turned into a game. And while everyone panicked, I couldn’t help but wonder if there was something wrong with my eyes. [Logging into the Game Master’s Account!] And my ‘oh-so-average’ destiny, changed into ‘is this a cheat life?’ Kind of destiny. [Would you like to Create a Skill? GM Points will be consumed!] While others struggled to kill a single goblin, I was searching for stronger monsters. While they were happy with getting even a random weak skill, I was customizing what kind of skills I needed. Even my Talents and Gifts can be customised. The only limit was my imagination. Heck, even the hidden quests that people would trigger randomly were present in front of me even before the scenario began.  It wasn’t fair by any means. But isn’t that how life is already? [Would you like to make changes to the quests in the next scenario? GM Points will be consumed!] Is this how an apocalypse is supposed to be? I don’t know. I just tried following the script in front of everyone while trying out my cheat in hindsight. Don't get me wrong with the ‘pig eating tiger’ kind of thing. I just don’t like attention. I would rather stay with two trusted friends than with 10 fake ones. [Would you like to Initiate a Custom quest for the Players? GM Points will be consumed!] And for the players who were bullying the ‘weak’ me. One may even wonder how they ended up losing half of their stats and skills in a randomly triggered impossible type of quest.  Fate can be truly scary, you know?  One must always be careful of it.

Ethel_Imaginations · Games
4.3
170 Chs