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Stan_God_LeeLv41yr
2023-04-18 22:30

Previous version of the story was well written and had a good premise and this is supposed to outdo the other one and so far it has had better punctuation and all that as well as the addition of the heavenly PIC which is always good so 5 stars from me author 👍👍👍👍👍

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Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

Yup, as I re read my work, the amount of slight grammar problems that I saw was quite significant, it made me cringe a little lol

Follower_of_AbadomAuthor

They should've been mostly corrected, albeit I'm sure there are some problems here and there, if you find any, I'm more then happy to fix it, Cheers.

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I really, really love this Book. Some of the Points I subjectively love about this Book( Up to Chapter 56 I read about): 1. The Mc is more or less a loner. Sure, he has friends, family, and all that, but in the Game, he stays alone most of the time and doesn't share everything he has with everyone he meets like in so many other MMORPG Video Games Novels. 2. Mc isn't a dense Idiot, but a normal Dude. Like, in most Chinese Novels the Mc is just plain Stupid. I am talking about 20 IQ Dump. And it is also shown that everyone now acts like a normal Human Being. There are Idiots in there. Very Intelligent People, Normal People, etc like it should be. 3. By God is it satisfying to see that the Author thought about most things and is intelligent enough to leave some things uncertain so he can re-write or write them at all in the future. Like when he limited Information about Scaling and Ranks/Grades. ETC ETC. Don't wanna write down everything because I ain't got that much time xD. Wanna read further. Also... Spoiler:(Maybe) I got some ideas about why he got his Powers etc. Obviously, this got something to do with People getting their Stats transferred after they hit Level 100 to the Real World and as it is shown they gotta accomplish something before they hit Level, or else their Level 100 Acc is worthless. Maybe the more they are engaged in the Main Story and the more they did the more Percentage they get to Transcende Humanity? Like when you get 50% you got a 50% Chance to get your Acc "transferred" to the Real World. Or maybe just a few Stats. Or maybe you just get to Awaken like you can start to Train like the Mc but you don't get your whole Acc. It is also concerning how the Company always reacts soooooo fast...almost Inhuman? Is the Company even Human, or is it one entity or many? Bro,I got so many questions and theories( mostly because I have read them in other NovelsxD) Well, all in all, I love it. It gives me peace of mind that there are still people out there writing Stories that didn't just graduate from kindergarten. Peace out[img=recommend]

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