Item: Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
Rating: 2
Author: Weizenbrot14

Weizenbrot14Lv41yr

2024-01-11 05:14

In short MC is a system user who is also a drug adict and smokes EVERY time; he is mister perfect everyone likes him for being a drug dealer. Teachers like him even thou he is being late EVERYTIME but are ok with why? because he has good grades yeah!!! police let him break the law multiple time reason? because Plot!!! Best Friends Parent's likes him why because the MC give they own kids drugs yeah!!!

Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

Flaming_Lines

4.1

70 Chs

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lol what?

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exactly

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The mc sucks. A fantasy about smoking weed and being a loner. Also being a super awesome biker in Twilight. Not seeing much personality besides that. Not even hints of a more interesting one :/ Would've stuck around to give it a better chance, but when I saw the story wasted our time describing him selling weed it was too hard to ignore what this was about. Writing Quality - 3 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4

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