If I don’t like my own story who will? I‘m actually enjoying the direction I’m going so far, it’s better than some of my previous works in my opinion.

W.Q: Not very good. S.D: same as cannon, no creativity. Seems as if MC himself doesn't have any knowledge about cannon. C.D: Not good discription given, even cheats are not used properly (Dungeon world cheats) MC's personality is same as MC of otome game world. U.S: 13/week it shows as of now. W.B: Very messy, not explained properly. Not very good as of now still much better than most fanfics which are being uploaded on webnovel at this period of time. Still to much like cannon, new O.C's are introduced but their presence don't change story in any way maybe something different will happen in future chapter's. But, as it is now not my cup of tea. [24-04-2023]-[ 16 chapters uploaded ]

the story seems good but there are just too many nerfs, giving the mc an op ability and then nerf it until it's useless, it doesn't make much sense to me. And i think even the mc's brain got nerfed by seeing how stupid he is.

author support... i have read both novel and anime... it always irked me that mc thought so lowly of himself and didnt chase Angelica and Olivia... though he ended up with them anyways it was because he was forced... then comes a wild Noelle... honest mc should out the pants in the relationship. i like yuri in hârêms but olivia and angelica.... at least have mc join lol, makes Leon be like the third wheel

Previous reviews deleted by the trash author (I like it he got power before going to the academy but it's too slow man I do hope you don't streach things out in the academy which we have already seen on both anime) (Yeah you can delete this too even then people would know that it's trash Lo l. like seriously why would webnovel give authors an option to even delete other’s review it's not like the review are for him when we review it's for other readers sh ee sh) (No it's just a advantage and a perk to trash authors like you who create trashy m c similar to them or just make m c suffer which is considered "comedy" to them Lo l low lives t ch and making a kind or good m c be ta, si mp or sub miss ive to bi t ch es I mean people of your kind don't like good woman and are be ta si mp to bi t ch es and sl u ts well 'you do you and favor those kind of woman only and you make even good female characters start acting like a bi t ch. Do consider they aren't your characters to ruin. Yeah?)

I don’t want to explain all the reasons it’s bad. Have a look and you’ll understand. It’s very cliche, basic, and extremely cringy.

copy paste trash with minor adjustments. . . . . . . . ...........................................................................................

Easily the best fanfic of Traped in a Dating Sim.The MC is not a reincarnation of Leon, and the writer makes him OP without being edgy and seems to be taking the story in a new direction after the duel against the 5 idiots.As for the romance, it seems to be centered around Livia and Angelica. It doesn't seem like there will be more but even if it will be a harem, the writer knows how to manage the dynamics of a relationship without making the girls to be trophy wives.( Honestly the romance is EX rating).Looking forward to see the story progressing further.

I must say, this is one of the best webnovels I've read in a while. I love how the 2 stories are mixed into one another, which gives a realistic power system. character development between Angie and Olivia is so well done, and the way the harem is slowly coming along isn't forced, and I love it so much because it actually plays on their character. and I love that the story deviates from the main plot of both after a while because if it had been so from the beginning then there would be no point in this, so I love this very very much. please keep up your fantastic work, and I really just want more chapters, hehe. 😁