Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

its supposed to be an mc making a village but the mc is only recruiting individuals instead of groups, like the mc is only getting named characters instead he should also recruit war orphans, worker civilians and clans like chinoike clan or that clan who have weather manipulation ability was it yuta's clan(episode 313) also jugo's clan. a side from what I said the rest of thee story is good. also for the harem part, currently the mc has 1 girl but very flirty which is far from the harem tag which is very fine for me.

I thought the story would be him creating a village and then some homunculi like Fate's to help him keep everything going (I thought about it because of the knowledge he gains, so I thought he was going to go that way) and then him making non-aggression/trade pacts with other villages, meeting characters and getting stronger and etc. But instead, the work is him collecting characters like Pokémon for his village and that's it, it's basically a slice of life of a very strong guy (he's literally enel lol) picking up characters for his village, that's all, it had a lot of potential, but it went down a very boring path.

Sounds promising, but the picture is misleading, I recommend to change it, because mc is a guy and he is not someone's experiment. A picture about enel, lighting or sky island would be better in my opinion.

I liked everything at the beginning. But before the hero had time to walk around in the new world, he thought about the harem. I didn't notice the harem tag, but this directly said something about it. Next... Haku? Seriously? I was hoping it would be at least a couple of decades before canon.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

TRUTH OF THE EARTH THE NOVEL IS EPIC FUN TO READ THE CHARACTERS ARE FUN AND THE PLOT IS FUN..I LOVE IT ONLY DUMB ANIMALS HATE IT THE AUTHOR IS A TRUE NARUTO FAN ..THIS NOVEL IS YUMMY

At first, I didn’t want to read this book, just by looking at the cover and the description, one would think that it was a Chinese translated book, to my suprise, it was nothing like the mtl books I’ve read. I like the grammar and the sentences are very fluid. The plot is very good and it isn’t rushed, although a harem is showing signs of being formed, i like the fact that the author is taking the story slow in the harem development. I like the pacing of the relationships and the world building. Overall, the plot is really good and this might be the best story I have read in a while.. I hope this novel doesn’t end. Goodluck on your writing journey 👍 Review as of chapter 48

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