Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

I thought the story would be him creating a village and then some homunculi like Fate's to help him keep everything going (I thought about it because of the knowledge he gains, so I thought he was going to go that way) and then him making non-aggression/trade pacts with other villages, meeting characters and getting stronger and etc. But instead, the work is him collecting characters like Pokémon for his village and that's it, it's basically a slice of life of a very strong guy (he's literally enel lol) picking up characters for his village, that's all, it had a lot of potential, but it went down a very boring path.

I liked everything at the beginning. But before the hero had time to walk around in the new world, he thought about the harem. I didn't notice the harem tag, but this directly said something about it. Next... Haku? Seriously? I was hoping it would be at least a couple of decades before canon.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Sounds promising, but the picture is misleading, I recommend to change it, because mc is a guy and he is not someone's experiment. A picture about enel, lighting or sky island would be better in my opinion.

The story is good and was great until recent chapters. The MC and origin are unique at least in this world and I enjoy kingdom building but as the story progressed it became more about leaf village hating and bashing than anything else. if your only villian is the third hokage and danzo then you don't have a compelling story. making the third a villian is so overused and cliche, used by disillusioned fanfic writers who corrupt the og story for likes from sad folks who hate heroes and love ambiguous and morally neutral protagonists and turning heroes into villians because they may be a hypocrite. Well everyone is, flaws, it makes them more real, yet villians are worse but are given a pass lol. While all that's not necessarily a bad thing, it lacks in the creativity needed to sustain an enjoyable story. overall the story is entertaining, but its trajectory at the moment is questionable.

The novel, although interesting, is boring, the funniest parts are when the protagonist shows his power, but that is what he does the least, things could be made easier by showing his power but no, he chooses the cliché way of hiding his power. .

At first, I didn’t want to read this book, just by looking at the cover and the description, one would think that it was a Chinese translated book, to my suprise, it was nothing like the mtl books I’ve read. I like the grammar and the sentences are very fluid. The plot is very good and it isn’t rushed, although a harem is showing signs of being formed, i like the fact that the author is taking the story slow in the harem development. I like the pacing of the relationships and the world building. Overall, the plot is really good and this might be the best story I have read in a while.. I hope this novel doesn’t end. Goodluck on your writing journey 👍 Review as of chapter 48

It started off very well, very fun and interesting, but recently, Mc has been making some very strange and confusing decisions.

fixed the dialogue which is a big W but update stability is killing the rating