Shameless author here :) Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! "First of all, what is this book about?" "It's about a guy named Karna who lived a normal life on earth. but was forcefully summoned to another world. Yeah, the same old Isekai. Every reader of a webnovel must have read one or more Isekai novels in their life by now. What makes this one any different? Well, like the other ones, mine also has action, adventure, mind-blowing new creatures and monsters, world-building, a demon lord with a big army, dwarfs, elves, dragons, etc. I even have eight heroes. What more do you want, man? Harem? Romance? I also have that prepared. And the differnce? That is giong to be revealed slowly so if you want know, then read it. ^_^ "Second, why should we read this?" "I've got to tell you, if you are checking this review, that means you already want to and just aren't sure of your choice yet. As a new writer, I can only request that you try my work." "Try reading, and if you like it, continue and also leave a review." "If you don't like it, then comment and try to tell me what you didn't like."
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1.) Apne MC ka poora naam kya hai? 2.) Harem mei heroines har race ki honi chahiye aur unka proper character development and proper reason hona chahiye for falling in love with our MC. 3.) Kya apne MC aur heroines ko aage jaake kisi Hindu Gods aur Goddesses ki blessing aur power milegi?
1st: Only Karna. :) As for the second and third questions, I can't answer them right now; wait for 100 to 200 chapters. In the future (after 100–200 chapters), I may also create a pole in discord or here to ask you guys: how many and which one of the female characters that I have introduced in the story till now do you want to see interacting with and falling in love with the MC. The harem will not be too large; only some chosen ones will be included. ( :-{)
Yajin3004:1.) Apne MC ka poora naam kya hai? 2.) Harem mei heroines har race ki honi chahiye aur unka proper character development and proper reason hona chahiye for falling in love with our MC. 3.) Kya apne MC aur heroines ko aage jaake kisi Hindu Gods aur Goddesses ki blessing aur power milegi?
Thank you for answering all questions and doubts. In fact, I also agree with you as I want to see the development of Karna. Harem is secondary.
Zeroce:1st: Only Karna. :) As for the second and third questions, I can't answer them right now; wait for 100 to 200 chapters. In the future (after 100–200 chapters), I may also create a pole in discord or here to ask you guys: how many and which one of the female characters that I have introduced in the story till now do you want to see interacting with and falling in love with the MC. The harem will not be too large; only some chosen ones will be included. ( :-{)
a system that devours worlds but can't devour a few mana crystals boasts that dragons, gods, beasts, humans, mounts will be devoured but you can't devour a few crystals..., I have a feeling that the mc will always be more weaker than the heroes by "destiny" like those typical novels where the protagonist has something op but by destiny he needs to work more and the others can advance easily, no matter how you look at it that system seems more useless than apparently it is and so far only It serves as a map, 10 chapters, the mc is just feeling sorry without forgetting his mentality, only two chapters and he forgot what the goddesses did to him, please...
Hello, You appear to be perplexed, and if you are, then my other readers may be perplexed as well. I was going to explain some of the stuff in the upcoming chapters, but well, here you go: First of all, when you hear "World Devouring System," please don't imagine a gaint maw devouring a world. It has a great plot of its own, which I am going to slowly unveil. Second: In the first 10 chapters, because he had to act in the presence of a deity, the MC just went with the flow, even if he was confused about his situation. Imagine yourself in front of a deity and think about how you will try to act when you want nothing from him or her and just want to go back. You will try to make your presence as small as possible. Third: Even if the system can devour the mana crystal, that doesn't mean it would be helpful to the MC's body right now. For example, you can devour poison and consume it, but that doesn't mean it will help you in any way; on the other hand, it will kill you. For the current Mc, mana is piosones, and until he can increase his mana deviation to a certain level, directly devouring mana crystals is a feature of the system that is useless to him in his current situation. :)
Veller_Cruz:a system that devours worlds but can't devour a few mana crystals boasts that dragons, gods, beasts, humans, mounts will be devoured but you can't devour a few crystals..., I have a feeling that the mc will always be more weaker than the heroes by "destiny" like those typical novels where the protagonist has something op but by destiny he needs to work more and the others can advance easily, no matter how you look at it that system seems more useless than apparently it is and so far only It serves as a map, 10 chapters, the mc is just feeling sorry without forgetting his mentality, only two chapters and he forgot what the goddesses did to him, please...
so the system CAN do it by it is not beneficial right now?
Zeroce:Hello, You appear to be perplexed, and if you are, then my other readers may be perplexed as well. I was going to explain some of the stuff in the upcoming chapters, but well, here you go: First of all, when you hear "World Devouring System," please don't imagine a gaint maw devouring a world. It has a great plot of its own, which I am going to slowly unveil. Second: In the first 10 chapters, because he had to act in the presence of a deity, the MC just went with the flow, even if he was confused about his situation. Imagine yourself in front of a deity and think about how you will try to act when you want nothing from him or her and just want to go back. You will try to make your presence as small as possible. Third: Even if the system can devour the mana crystal, that doesn't mean it would be helpful to the MC's body right now. For example, you can devour poison and consume it, but that doesn't mean it will help you in any way; on the other hand, it will kill you. For the current Mc, mana is piosones, and until he can increase his mana deviation to a certain level, directly devouring mana crystals is a feature of the system that is useless to him in his current situation. :)
and btw ye 0 chs per week kyu dikha rha hai?
Zeroce:Hello, You appear to be perplexed, and if you are, then my other readers may be perplexed as well. I was going to explain some of the stuff in the upcoming chapters, but well, here you go: First of all, when you hear "World Devouring System," please don't imagine a gaint maw devouring a world. It has a great plot of its own, which I am going to slowly unveil. Second: In the first 10 chapters, because he had to act in the presence of a deity, the MC just went with the flow, even if he was confused about his situation. Imagine yourself in front of a deity and think about how you will try to act when you want nothing from him or her and just want to go back. You will try to make your presence as small as possible. Third: Even if the system can devour the mana crystal, that doesn't mean it would be helpful to the MC's body right now. For example, you can devour poison and consume it, but that doesn't mean it will help you in any way; on the other hand, it will kill you. For the current Mc, mana is piosones, and until he can increase his mana deviation to a certain level, directly devouring mana crystals is a feature of the system that is useless to him in his current situation. :)
Yes
Test_Misc:so the system CAN do it by it is not beneficial right now?
good luck 🍀🤞
New reader here, I like the story so far.What is the release rate? It has been almost a month since the last chapter. Are you on a hiatus?
I apologize for the delayed response. I am not on hiatus, but I admit I've been a lazy writer trying to become more active. Please bear with me as I will make an effort to update more frequently from now on.
Gamercat:New reader here, I like the story so far.What is the release rate? It has been almost a month since the last chapter. Are you on a hiatus?
Have you dropped the novel Mr.Author?
bro update please 🥺
Will there be any yuri or ntr in the novel?
Zeroce:1st: Only Karna. :) As for the second and third questions, I can't answer them right now; wait for 100 to 200 chapters. In the future (after 100–200 chapters), I may also create a pole in discord or here to ask you guys: how many and which one of the female characters that I have introduced in the story till now do you want to see interacting with and falling in love with the MC. The harem will not be too large; only some chosen ones will be included. ( :-{)
No
Sinful_Cyanide:Will there be any yuri or ntr in the novel?
Wanted to ask if you’re on hiatus or did you drop the novel?
