So far its an amazing story with great world building, and although I have seen similar tropes in manga played out, I think there is enough twists to give itself its own fresh take. The writing is really well done and the character development, while having only just started, is progressing well. Keep up the good work!

Shameless author here :) Writing a review for your own book is not easy, so I'll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! "First of all, what is this book about?" "It's about a guy named Karna who lived a normal life on earth. but was forcefully summoned to another world. Yeah, the same old Isekai. Every reader of a webnovel must have read one or more Isekai novels in their life by now. What makes this one any different? Well, like the other ones, mine also has action, adventure, mind-blowing new creatures and monsters, world-building, a demon lord with a big army, dwarfs, elves, dragons, etc. I even have eight heroes. What more do you want, man? Harem? Romance? I also have that prepared. And the differnce? That is giong to be revealed slowly so if you want know, then read it. ^_^ "Second, why should we read this?" "I've got to tell you, if you are checking this review, that means you already want to and just aren't sure of your choice yet. As a new writer, I can only request that you try my work." "Try reading, and if you like it, continue and also leave a review." "If you don't like it, then comment and try to tell me what you didn't like."          

After reading six chapters, I can confidently say that this book is worth checking out. The characters are well-crafted and relatable, making it easy to get invested in their stories.One of the things that stood out to me was the quality of the writing. The author has done an excellent job with the word buildup, and I have yet to come across any grammatical errors. The writing quality is top-notch, and every scene is described in such detail that it creates a vivid picture in your mind.Overall, I believe this book has a lot of potentials and could become quite popular if the author continues to write in this manner. I highly recommend giving it a read if you're looking for an engaging and well-written webnovel book.

I am currently still reading this but I am loving it yeah many will say its kind of cliche but no worries no story is free of cliche but I like Karna in this novel the most not only because of his personality but also because of the world devouring system. My favorite thing in fiction is system. So author please continue it

I am still reading it .I like the character karna. But you need to take care of some grammer errors. Overall the story is good. Keep writing......

I don’t usually read novels like this but i thought it doesn’t look bad. So far, the mc karna seems sensible to me. I don’t found anything wrong with the characters, except writing errors. In most chapters I noticed you used comma instead of full-stop in some sentences. You also mostly used “he” while narrating what mc was doing. I don’t know if it was me, but the repeating words were kinda annoying. Overall I only read 5 chapters, so I can’t say much about the story. Hopefully the plot opens up in the future. This story does have potential. All the best author.

I’ve read 9 chapters and literally nothing has happened. Just a whole bunch of talking.

It's refreshing to see an Indian-themed story, the writing is above average and easy to read. I read the first chapter and kept going. Keep up the good work author kun

Excellent world building, everything is explained well and doesn't feel like an info dump. The story is easy to follow and adds some touches to the genre that make it more unique.