Review Detail of Lord_Azathoth in Wang An Leiji (Yang Leiji) (What If I was In Martial Peak)
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Here's a suggestion bro 1. People love to read the original mc getting Face slapped so do it in the next novel 2. Make it revenge type or transmigration type 3. Put all original female characters like Su Yan, Xia Ning Chang etc into the story 4. Can you also make a fanfic of tbate, atg or btth? Martial Peak is great but it's just boring đ
Wang An Leiji (Yang Leiji) (What If I was In Martial Peak)
Dark_Shurikens
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I'm not exactly sure what persecution you're talking about here... yang Kai isn't the main character in this series. However, he isn't ignored. In fact, I make him magnitudes stronger than he was in the series, I specifically got rid of all the BS Nerfs, the original series author had forced onto Yang Kai. If you have a problem with an OC being in a position where he must deal with the original series problems, especially the powerscaling... Then my series isn't for you. But try to understand that it's not persecution. I have actually made an active effort to rectify the actual persecution Yang Kai had dealt with in the original series.
Long_Hao_Chen:I don't like this, not because I like the original mc, but because I find this persecution annoying, if the new mc doesn't like the original mc, then kill him, if he has a neutral attitude, leave him alone, which I don't like the most of these persecutions and the fact that the original mc somehow, with his luck as a protagonist, always manages to chase the new mc in strength, he neither caught up nor surpassed him but he always comes close, the original mc is all confident with his new strength and then gets slapped in my face, for me if people want to see the original mc discouraged and humiliated, for me they should just let him follow the normal cultivation path without the protagonist aura helping him find treasures and everything, the humiliation and discouragement would be to see the new mc constantly stronger while his cultivation is so slow compared to the new mc, for me that is humiliation without being a forced humiliation where the new mc has an obsession with humiliating the original mc in each chapter
yea, you could go for btth or wdkq or rather the an oc in the great thousand world from the great ruler to start his conquest, I've only read one fanfic with great thousand world till now but even that went downhill pretty fast.
Dark_Shurikens:Thanks for the comment! My goal for when I finish up my fan fictions is to create my own original series. So these points you've suggested will come in handy. Though I think you'll like the arc I am taking my OC here through.
Just_Jam:yea, you could go for btth or wdkq or rather the an oc in the great thousand world from the great ruler to start his conquest, I've only read one fanfic with great thousand world till now but even that went downhill pretty fast.
"Xuanhuan: I Medicine Emperor Han Feng, Has Life Simulator"I read it on mtlnation, mc transmigrates as yao lao's disciple, he's smart for calculating almost everyone, after becoming doudi he takes soul emperor, gu yuan, dragon emperor and other eight (kings I guess) to great thousand world. Btw his cheat it op af.
DanJason16:what's the title of the fanfic bro?? just curious
Just_Jam:"Xuanhuan: I Medicine Emperor Han Feng, Has Life Simulator"I read it on mtlnation, mc transmigrates as yao lao's disciple, he's smart for calculating almost everyone, after becoming doudi he takes soul emperor, gu yuan, dragon emperor and other eight (kings I guess) to great thousand world. Btw his cheat it op af.
Personally I read fanfiction for fiction I like, so normally I do not like the original MC being screwed over in the fanfiction, it always feels kind of... scammy, basically trying to take over a novel rather than a FANfiction.
Dark_Shurikens:Thanks for the comment! My goal for when I finish up my fan fictions is to create my own original series. So these points you've suggested will come in handy. Though I think you'll like the arc I am taking my OC here through.
I also don't like that either, but I go one step further. I think that unless it supposed to be the gimik of the series and main plot line, the MC shouldn't be screwed over even by their own author. There are numerous ways that Yang Kai had been screwed over. I do intend on rectifying at least some of the problems in this series. Righting a few of the wrongs. So to speak. Much of this won't be able to happen until later in. But I hope you enjoy the ride.
ErozothDraeor:Personally I read fanfiction for fiction I like, so normally I do not like the original MC being screwed over in the fanfiction, it always feels kind of... scammy, basically trying to take over a novel rather than a FANfiction.
I don't like this, not because I like the original mc, but because I find this persecution annoying, if the new mc doesn't like the original mc, then kill him, if he has a neutral attitude, leave him alone, which I don't like the most of these persecutions and the fact that the original mc somehow, with his luck as a protagonist, always manages to chase the new mc in strength, he neither caught up nor surpassed him but he always comes close, the original mc is all confident with his new strength and then gets slapped in my face, for me if people want to see the original mc discouraged and humiliated, for me they should just let him follow the normal cultivation path without the protagonist aura helping him find treasures and everything, the humiliation and discouragement would be to see the new mc constantly stronger while his cultivation is so slow compared to the new mc, for me that is humiliation without being a forced humiliation where the new mc has an obsession with humiliating the original mc in each chapter
Dark_Shurikens:I also don't like that either, but I go one step further. I think that unless it supposed to be the gimik of the series and main plot line, the MC shouldn't be screwed over even by their own author. There are numerous ways that Yang Kai had been screwed over. I do intend on rectifying at least some of the problems in this series. Righting a few of the wrongs. So to speak. Much of this won't be able to happen until later in. But I hope you enjoy the ride.
A fanfiction.Btth - Battle through the heavens.Atg - Against the gods.Make a proper fanfic if you want to.
Dark_Shurikens:What are you even talking about?
I have 3 right now. I don't know what led you to this complaint. But apparently you haven't read my series. Which only makes your comments lose credibility. The series the fanfiction takes place in doesn't determine proper and improper. It's merely preference.
Lord_Azathoth:A fanfiction.Btth - Battle through the heavens.Atg - Against the gods.Make a proper fanfic if you want to.
Dark_Shurikens:I have 3 right now. I don't know what led you to this complaint. But apparently you haven't read my series. Which only makes your comments lose credibility. The series the fanfiction takes place in doesn't determine proper and improper. It's merely preference.
he is in the story! You didn't read into the story long enough. Don't make claims that you have zero information to make. Not only is Yang Kai in the story, but so too are the wives. His parents, friends, and even the Great Emperors. It's your own fault for not bothering to read the series. After halfway through chapter 1 of the series, you should have been able to pick up on the whole transmigration.
Lord_Azathoth:Put the original Mc in the fanfic at least, why don't you do that? It's boring like this.
Which one? One in which he is Yang Kaiâs little brother or the other one? I'm sorry but I don't like yang kai. Did your Mc cuck him? If yes, then I'll read it. Don't worry, your books are gold but readers prefer face-slapping.
Dark_Shurikens:he is in the story! You didn't read into the story long enough. Don't make claims that you have zero information to make. Not only is Yang Kai in the story, but so too are the wives. His parents, friends, and even the Great Emperors. It's your own fault for not bothering to read the series. After halfway through chapter 1 of the series, you should have been able to pick up on the whole transmigration.
Lord_Azathoth:Which one? One in which he is Yang Kaiâs little brother or the other one? I'm sorry but I don't like yang kai. Did your Mc cuck him? If yes, then I'll read it. Don't worry, your books are gold but readers prefer face-slapping.
