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2024-01-17 12:36

got to ch11.. anyways, the mc is incredibly stupid.. thats my impression of everything he does.. he goes out of his way to throw away his cards. he is arrogant, and also doesn't act like a normal human at all.. its like he tries to be a 2nd ayanokoji but just ends up acting like a weirdo. he also follows ayanokoji around like a dog. It honestly one of those fanfics where you cant help but wonder whats the point... seriously. nothing changes, you just make an mc that follows around the 'mc' and call it a new story.

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thank you for your criticism... every single point you made were valid, and i will not try to fight back. Hope you find something that suits your choice.... Anyways, have a good day.

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