Only read two chapters, but I can just already tell that this wonโt be my cup of tea. The MC seems like a literal side character. He never really does anything of value, and nothing he does effects the story.
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Well, I do admit that the beginning wasn't my proudest of work.
im a new reader so i havent started on this fanfic yet but by the looks of it i already really want to read your fanfic.....the thing is i dont wanna waste my time and emotions on something that i will as always take way to seriously, im that guy who is told by people to chill and not get too into it so i really wanna know if this fanfic of yours is as good as it seems, im sorry if i came off as abit rude but i had recently just raged quit out of something i was as you can tell getting too into, so im merely being cautious of another session of irritation again i am sorry and please tell me if your fanfic is good or not
It's okay... I can understand what you were trying to say. Well, to answer your question, I may not be the right person to ask that. Obviously I'm biased toward my own work. Some people seem enjoy this fic quite well, while the other's certainly gave me some harsh words... *shudders in trauma...In any case, I want you to give this story a chance. See if you're able to vibe with it. There are sever changes in the plot later on... By sever... I mean SEVER!!!!
good to know and thanks for answering i'll start reading right away!
what type of harem is this? is this the type where girls like him but he doesn't know/don't acknowledge it. or is it the bountiful maidens type?
He knows, but doesn't acknowledge them. You see, he hasn't 'truly' accepted them as 'hamans', he still thinks that they're just 'characters'. He uses their feelings for his own modus operandi. But at some point, i think he'll beat himself up for thinking like that :)
