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2023-04-13 04:08

While everyone is entitled to their own opinion, I personally have several issues with this story. First of all, I find it hard to believe that the main character is able to learn alchemy simply by watching Full Metal Alchemist. This seems unrealistic and takes away from the story's credibility. Additionally, there are numerous grammatical errors throughout the text which can be distracting and hinder the overall reading experience. Another problem I have is with the author's tendency to copy content from the wiki without making any changes, and in one chapter, even including an event that takes place 200 years in the future. Furthermore, the main character vows to protect his family, but we as readers have not been given any information about them to feel a connection to them. Moreover, the introduction of Truth from Full Metal Alchemist seems out of place and doesn't even feel like it belongs in a Fairy Tail fanfiction. Ultimately, the story has potential, but its execution leaves much to be desired.

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thank you bro the same thing bothered me as well and on top of that the guy did not save his 2nd life parents even after staying with them for 5 years and tried to save Mavis despite knowing that she will be safe. the reason for saving author says that ot is because Mavis reminds him of his past family like bro you have 2nd parents in 2nd life alive and baces on what is described they treated him nicely.if author wanted to just kill the parents then do it before mc have some power or possibly of saving them or portray them as unloving parents otherwise it leaves bad taste on readers like me. just my person opinion.

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Wow its been a will since I've wen proper review

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