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interman
intermanLv41yr
2023-04-18 01:17

stop ruining the rating. --------------

Fairy Tail: Magical Life

Jovami6729
4.0
91 Chs

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Sinbad_12
Sinbad_12Lv3

how are the reviews ruining the rating, they are all valid points and criticisms just because you like a garbage story doesn't mean everyone else will. There's a reason the most liked review for this story with 53 likes is a 2 star bro

1yr
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interman
intermanLv4

You don't get to 65 in power ranking by being bad.

Sinbad_12:how are the reviews ruining the rating, they are all valid points and criticisms just because you like a garbage story doesn't mean everyone else will. There's a reason the most liked review for this story with 53 likes is a 2 star bro
1yr
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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

Okay, so I have many problems with this story. First of all you bring him into the world of fairy tail a world of magic and his first thoughts and only goal is to do alchemy? He wants to be like full metal alchemy If you wanted this then just do a full metal alchemy story.. Mc’s wants to not be friends with mavis but wants to be her subordinat? What. She is a child. The story makes no sense so far and just makes the mc seem stupid. The thing that has annoyed me the most is being deceived by the author. You hinted in the title it was magic and in the synopsis there is no mention at all about the mc not having magic so he will focus on the alchemy instead and overcome it. In fact if this was mentioned in the description I wouldn’t been so turned off by the story. Essentially, you are missinforming the readers to click the story and get more views. Where as if you put what the story was acc about you wouldn’t have got as many. This is what has annoyed me the most. That may not have been your intention but this is what it has felt like.

1yr

noname_marco
noname_marcoLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Sinbad_12
Sinbad_12Lv3

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Nightwolf98
Nightwolf98Lv4

name child meivs and MC skyaliar short sky could makes sky into future be fairy tail like she was frozen in ice or time (mavis,natsu) i would be curious what you will do zerf become his friend or quality will destroy the curse or just find ways to kill him _______________________________________ good luck framing a good story for us reading 🖤🖤🖤

1yr
AEE_R123
AEE_R123Lv1

this story just isn't that good for a better explanation look at the other reviews ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv14

Disappointing. Thats the only word I can use to describe this book. For goodness sake, this is a Fairy Tail FF. Not full metal alchemist, so why bring truth into context, if you had brought in death as a God then that's okay, after all, Zeref's curse has to have come from somewhere, but why truth? That's just one though. Why is the MC stupid? I thought he went to community college, so how can he want to be below Mavis? No, why did he even use Mavis DNA as a foundation for his magic when if he follows her, he could have met Zeref? Also, Change your synopsis and title if this is a Fairy Tail × Full metal alchemist mashup

1yr
Samot_Sempai
Samot_SempaiLv12

Well I read till chapter 6 and I can say that this story is a potential 10/10 with the concept of alchemy of FMA but please No Harem. Questions apart have you abandoned completely your past works?

1yr
Yue_021
Yue_021Lv14

I caught up to Ch.8 and so far this one is looking good. It has great potential to be an outstanding novel. I can see the improvement from ch.1 to ch.8, his speech is becoming more refined compared to the abrasive one in ch.1, and then I can see that his relationship with Mavis is progressive so it doesnt feel forced. With some careful planning and continous development in their relationship, I can see you writing a a great novel compared to those trashy gotta catch them all harem novels.

1yr
Rosignol
RosignolLv3

I contradict all those who put a bad note to the author under full of pretexts when the story is really good by reading the first 3 chapters they criticized the story like never before. The only pretext is: the mc is in Fairy Tail why is he the alchemy of FMA? And why not? The author's only mistake is that he should have said that there would be alchemy. That's all I like the author story so keep going.

1yr
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