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asaade
asaadeLv102yr
2023-04-15 01:48

you should put that there's a system in the sypnosis or in the tag you should put that there's a system in the sypnosis or in the tag you should put that there's a system in the sypnosis or in the tag you should put that there's a system in the sypnosis or in the tag you should put that there's a system in the sypnosis or in the tag you should put that there's a system in the sypnosis or in the tag

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Desertstorm
DesertstormLv3

So one star for not adding a tag? That's pathetic and doesn't even say anything about the actual fanfic novel.

asaade
asaadeLv10

duhhh of course that's one of the things many people look when they're looking to read something, and you an idiot that can't understand that saying it has a system already says a lot to the fanfic

Desertstorm:So one star for not adding a tag? That's pathetic and doesn't even say anything about the actual fanfic novel.
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Desertstorm
DesertstormLv3

Could have been accidentally missed you moron. You're the idiot who had to repeat himself like 4 times like a parrot and rated the novel 1 star for simply not adding a bloody tag which has no actual relevance to the quality of the novel. You're such a spanner it's unreal.

asaade:duhhh of course that's one of the things many people look when they're looking to read something, and you an idiot that can't understand that saying it has a system already says a lot to the fanfic
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Hellowkun
HellowkunAuthor

I don't add the system because I don't want to boost his power with system too much. So you will only find a little where our MC use his system. But It's okay since you make it a problem then I add it. It's easy I just edit it by the way

DotComplex
DotComplexLv3

Ok he added the tag in, delete the comment your problem is solved.

asaade
asaadeLv10

dont want to

DotComplex:Ok he added the tag in, delete the comment your problem is solved.
asaade
asaadeLv10

ahhh who are you again? are you relevant to the conversation? oh you're not, then why are you here?

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Antonigiggs
AntonigiggsLv3

yep from your reading history the book you are comment either Pokemon, Naruto, all anime. Case closed. you are undeage kid. bye

asaade:ahhh who are you again? are you relevant to the conversation? oh you're not, then why are you here?
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Even if he did that, you should still give all SYSTEM stories 1 star regardless.

InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I love you. :P

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InternetSaint
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Desertstorm:So one star for not adding a tag? That's pathetic and doesn't even say anything about the actual fanfic novel.
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InternetSaint:
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